Re: path: revised lynx-dev.html

[Doug Kaufman]

On Sun, 11 Apr 1999, Philip Webb wrote:

> > a note about the dev.nn series should be added to  lynx_help/lynx-dev.html ,
> > which could probably do with some simplification anyway.
> > subject to comments, i'll see if i can do something with it.
>  
> an updated version of the file can be found at
>  http://www.chass.utoronto.ca/~purslow/lynx-dev.html ;
> please view at it with Lynx to see the lay-out correctly.

For some reason, you seem to have added <br> at the end of each line.
Except for  places where this is meaningful, it should probably be
avoided. It reads well. I would recommend the following grammar
correction:

--- lynx-dev.html.ori   Sun Apr 11 10:34:06 1999
+++ lynx-dev.html       Sun Apr 11 10:35:21 1999
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 Lynx is maintained and improved by an international co-operative<br>
 of volunteers.  Newcomers are welcome to join the group:<br>
 you needn't be a super programmer, but you should be prepared<br>
-to listen and learn, as well as contributing patches if you can.<br>
+to listen and learn, as well as to contribute patches if you can.<br>
 Since everyone is a volunteer, you will usually be expected<br>
 to try to implement any suggestions you make.
 
                             Doug
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