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bug#42154: 26.3; [DOC] This wording is too complex: frame's window-syste
From: |
Eli Zaretskii |
Subject: |
bug#42154: 26.3; [DOC] This wording is too complex: frame's window-system window. |
Date: |
Sat, 04 Jul 2020 10:21:39 +0300 |
> Date: Thu, 02 Jul 2020 16:03:17 +0300
> From: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
> Cc: ke.vigouroux@laposte.net, 42154@debbugs.gnu.org
>
> > From: Richard Stallman <rms@gnu.org>
> > Date: Wed, 01 Jul 2020 23:47:13 -0400
> > Cc: 42154@debbugs.gnu.org
> >
> > One thing I notice is that this uses passive voice.
> > That tends to be harder to read; also, it leaves the
> > subject unstated, and that vagueness can hurt.
>
> Is the below better?
>
> If this is 'above', the window-system displays the window that
> corresponds to the frame above all other window-system's windows
> that do not have the 'above' property set.
I installed that rewording, and I'm marking this bug done.