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Re: proofreader
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Brian Sammon |
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Re: proofreader |
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Sun, 19 Oct 2003 17:12:30 -0400 |
> This is a patch by Eric for the documentation. As I'm not a native speaker, I
> sometimes cannot determine which is better, mine or his. So can you comment
> on any or all of his changes, if you speak English fluently?
Wow, there's a lot of changes there--almost too much for one sitting.
But, I made it through the whole thing, and here's my thoughts--
I'll separate the changes into two types:
1) The changes that rewrote things to make them clearer.
2) The changes that added content.
The first set were all good improvements, and I highly recommend you apply
those changes.
As for the new content, I don't have much opinion on that, except to say that
If I were to choose between making all the changes and making none, I'd vote
for making all the changes.
P.S. To relate this to the recent topic of mailing lists, maybe a grub-doc
mailing list is a good idea.
- proofreader, Yoshinori K. Okuji, 2003/10/19
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