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Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi
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Kevin Ryde |
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Re: [DOCPATCH]Revamp of doc/ref/scheme-control.texi |
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Thu, 24 Jul 2003 09:53:04 +1000 |
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Stephen Compall <address@hidden> writes:
>
> I was planning on saving this until I could get all the way through
> the file, but it's getting a little unwieldy, so please have a look.
> ChangeLog at the bottom of this email.
It'll be easier to review if you post independent changes separately,
showing the new text.
> * scheme-control.texi (while do): Continue converting to active
> voice.
I wouldn't worry about that sort of thing, not unless it's really
unclear.
> * scheme-control.texi (begin): Added note about begin's
> uselessness.
Well, it's only sometimes not required. If you want to add something,
then perhaps a typical use in an `if'.
> Untabified.
> Fixed result indication in call-with-values example.
Thanks, I applied these bits.