Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I

[Matias Fonzo]

El 2020-02-04 20:50, Michael Siegel escribió:
> Am 04.02.20 um 00:21 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
> > El 2020-02-02 10:45, Michael Siegel escribió:
> > > Well, as I've stated earlier, I thought the version before 
> > > 2019-12-29[1]
> > > was quite viable already and just needed a few adjustments, some of
> > > which I suggested in two messages to this mailing list on 2019-12-28 
> > > and
> > > 2019-12-29:
> > >
> > > https://lists.nongnu.org/archive/html/dragora-users/2019-12/msg00007.html
> >
> > Okay.  I have made the changes as you suggested in the previous 
> > message
> > ^.  Also trying an explanation for <Space>, <Enter>.  Let me know what
> > you think.
>
> That looks really good!

Good.  :-)

> Only two minor issues:
>
> #1
> “Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.”
>
> It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.”

That explains why it sounded weird to me.

> #2
> “Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any
> time.”
>
> I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not
> wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that
> further, if you're interested.

http://git.savannah.nongnu.org/cgit/dragora.git/commit/?id=210d3ccc855e1b1e54d92758e656c5166ed53b36

> > P.S: I haven't uploaded the package for these changes yet, as I'm in 
> > the
> > bootstrap process.
>
> That's fine. Just take your time.

http://rsync.dragora.org/v3/packages/x86_64/tools/dragora-installer-20200204-x86_64+1.tlz
http://rsync.dragora.org/v3/packages/x86_64/tools/dragora-installer-20200204-x86_64+1.tlz.sha256

Are there other messages you would like to improve?.


Thanks,
Matías