master b1011e9: ; * etc/NEWS: Fix wording of a recently added entry.

[Eli Zaretskii]

branch: master
commit b1011e9e95e204e8a97be8369d8a95bb3ddcec70
Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>

    ; * etc/NEWS: Fix wording of a recently added entry.
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 etc/NEWS | 29 ++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index 8ecc6ac..b8413ae 100644
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -358,21 +358,24 @@ summary of where Emacs is using memory currently.
 
 +++
 *** New commands to cycle heading visibility.
-Typing 'TAB' on a heading cycles the current section between "hide
-all", "subheadings", and "show all" state.  Typing 'S-TAB' anywhere in
-the buffer cycles the whole buffer between "only top-level headings",
-"all headings and subheadings", and "show all" states.
+Typing 'TAB' on a heading line cycles the current section between
+"hide all", "subheadings", and "show all" states.  Typing 'S-TAB'
+anywhere in the buffer cycles the whole buffer between "only top-level
+headings", "all headings and subheadings", and "show all" states.
 
 *** New minor mode 'outline-cycle-minor-mode'.
-It enables 'outline-minor-mode' with keys 'TAB' and 'S-TAB' activated
-on headings to cycle heading visibility.  Typing 'TAB' on a heading
-cycles the current section between "hide all", "subheadings", and
-"show all" state.  Typing 'S-TAB' on a heading cycles the whole buffer
-between "only top-level headings", "all headings and subheadings", and
-"show all" states.  Another new mode 'outline-cycle-highlight-minor-mode'
-additionally puts highlighting on headings with standard outline faces,
-this works well only when there are no conflicts with faces used
-by major mode.
+This mode is a variant of 'outline-minor-mode', with the difference
+that 'TAB' and 'S-TAB' on heading lines cycle heading visibility.
+Typing 'TAB' on a heading line cycles the current section between
+"hide all", "subheadings", and "show all" states.  Typing 'S-TAB' on a
+heading line cycles the whole buffer between "only top-level
+headings", "all headings and subheadings", and "show all" states.
+
+*** New minor mode 'outline-cycle-highlight-minor-mode'.
+This mode is a variant of 'outline-cycle-minor-mode'.  It puts
+highlighting on heading lines using standard outline faces.  This
+works well only when there are no conflicts with faces used by the
+major mode.
 
 
 * Changes in Specialized Modes and Packages in Emacs 28.1