[gNewSense-users] edited home page

[Ali Gunduz]

Hi all,

The new homepage looks great! However, after Chris M. Simon mentioned that the language was a little strange, I took the liberty of editing it. Although you can diff it yourself, the main changes are:

- The "we" and "our"s are changed to "you" and "your"s, since this introduction explains what the newcomers can achieve by using gNS.
- "email" to "email management"
- "messenging" to "messaging"
- "Learn more about gNewSense" is linked to the Wiki Main instead of the features page. 'Features' is a very short document, mainly listing what features are removed. I think - especially in the introductory stage - the provided features should be emphasized not the removed ones. We should promote gNS not as a bastardization of Ubuntu but as the fruit of the free software.

Ali

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