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[GNUnet-SVN] [lsd0001] branch master updated: minor changes


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Subject: [GNUnet-SVN] [lsd0001] branch master updated: minor changes
Date: Fri, 04 Oct 2019 16:35:50 +0200

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martin-schanzenbach pushed a commit to branch master
in repository lsd0001.

The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/master by this push:
     new 38d7b9f  minor changes
38d7b9f is described below

commit 38d7b9f2dfeadac7ab11c104df6c46ac8ed453ab
Author: Schanzenbach, Martin <address@hidden>
AuthorDate: Fri Oct 4 16:33:39 2019 +0200

    minor changes
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.html | 57 +++++++++++++++---------------
 draft-schanzen-gns.txt  | 92 ++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml  | 58 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 3 files changed, 106 insertions(+), 101 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.html b/draft-schanzen-gns.html
index 3b722fe..8bc8657 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.html
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.html
@@ -1224,17 +1224,18 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 <dl class="dlParallel" id="section-3-4">
         <dt id="section-3-4.1">EXPIRATION</dt>
         <dd id="section-3-4.2">
-     Denotes the absolute expiration date of the record.
+     denotes the absolute 64-bit expiration date of the record.
      In microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1, 1970 in network
      byte order.<a href="#section-3-4.2" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
         <dt id="section-3-4.3">DATA SIZE</dt>
         <dd id="section-3-4.4">
-      The size of the DATA field in bytes and in network byte order.<a 
href="#section-3-4.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+      denotes the 32-bit size of the DATA field in bytes and in network byte
+      order.<a href="#section-3-4.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
         <dt id="section-3-4.5">TYPE</dt>
         <dd id="section-3-4.6">
-     The resource record type. This type can be one of the GNS resource
+     is the 32-bit resource record type. This type can be one of the GNS 
resource
      records as defined in <a href="#rrecords" class="xref">Section 3</a> or a 
DNS record
      type as defined in <span>[<a href="#RFC1035" 
class="xref">RFC1035</a>]</span> or any of the
      complementary standardized DNS resource record types. This value must be
@@ -1243,11 +1244,12 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 </dd>
         <dt id="section-3-4.7">FLAGS</dt>
         <dd id="section-3-4.8">
-     Resource record flags.<a href="#section-3-4.8" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+     is a 32-bit resource record flags field (see below).<a 
href="#section-3-4.8" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
         <dt id="section-3-4.9">DATA</dt>
         <dd id="section-3-4.10">
-     The resource record data payload. The contents are defined by the
+     the variable-length resource record data payload. The contents are defined
+     by the
      respective type of the resource record.<a href="#section-3-4.10" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
       </dl>
@@ -1439,21 +1441,21 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 <dl class="dlParallel" id="section-3.4-3">
           <dt id="section-3.4-3.1">PROTO</dt>
           <dd id="section-3.4-3.2">
-          the protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp. In network byte order.<a 
href="#section-3.4-3.2" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp. In network byte order.<a 
href="#section-3.4-3.2" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-3.4-3.3">SVC</dt>
           <dd id="section-3.4-3.4">
-          the service of the boxed record, i.e. the port number. In network
-          byte order.<a href="#section-3.4-3.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          the 16-bit service value of the boxed record, i.e. the port number.
+          In network byte order.<a href="#section-3.4-3.4" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-3.4-3.5">TYPE</dt>
           <dd id="section-3.4-3.6">
-          Record type of the boxed record. In network byte order.<a 
href="#section-3.4-3.6" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is the 32-bit record type of the boxed record. In network byte 
order.<a href="#section-3.4-3.6" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-3.4-3.7">RECORD DATA</dt>
           <dd id="section-3.4-3.8">
-          This is the "DATA" format of TYPE as defined for the respective TYPE
-          in DNS.<a href="#section-3.4-3.8" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is a variable length field containing the "DATA" format of TYPE as
+          defined for the respective TYPE in DNS.<a href="#section-3.4-3.8" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
         </dl>
 </section>
@@ -1499,26 +1501,26 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.3">h</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.4">
-          is the HKDF expansion result. The expansion info is a concatenation 
of
-          the label and string "gns".<a href="#section-4.1-3.4" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is the 512-bit HKDF expansion result. The expansion info input is a
+          concatenation of the label and string "gns".<a 
href="#section-4.1-3.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.5">d</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.6">
-          is the private zone key as defined in <a href="#zones" 
class="xref">Section 2</a>.<a href="#section-4.1-3.6" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is the 256-bit private zone key as defined in <a href="#zones" 
class="xref">Section 2</a>.<a href="#section-4.1-3.6" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.7">label</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.8">
-          under wich the resource records are published.<a 
href="#section-4.1-3.8" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is a UTF-8 string under wich the resource records are published.<a 
href="#section-4.1-3.8" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.9">d_h</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.10">
-          is a private key derived from the "d" using the
-          keying material "h" (512 bit).<a href="#section-4.1-3.10" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is a 256-bit private key derived from the "d" using the
+          keying material "h".<a href="#section-4.1-3.10" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.11">zk_h</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.12">
-          is a public key derived from the zone key "zk" using the keying
-          material "h" (512 bit).<a href="#section-4.1-3.12" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          is a 256-bit public key derived from the zone key "zk" using the
+          keying material "h".<a href="#section-4.1-3.12" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.13">p</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.14">
@@ -1526,7 +1528,8 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.1-3.15">q</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.1-3.16">
-          Is the DHT key under which the resource records block is published.
+          Is the 512-bit DHT key under which the resource records block is
+          published.
           It is the SHA512 hash over the public key "zk_h" corresponding to the
           derived private key "d_h".<a href="#section-4.1-3.16" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
@@ -1588,7 +1591,7 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.2-4.3">PUBLIC KEY</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.2-4.4">
-          The 256-bit ECC public key "zk_h" to be used to verify SIGNATURE. The
+          is the 256-bit public key "zk_h" to be used to verify SIGNATURE. The
           wire format of this value is defined in <span>[<a href="#RFC8032" 
class="xref">RFC8032</a>]</span>,
           Section 5.1.5.<a href="#section-4.2-4.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
@@ -1606,7 +1609,8 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.2-4.9">EXPIRATION</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.2-4.10">
-          The resource records block expiration time. This is the expiration
+          is the 64-bit resource records block expiration time. This is the
+          expiration
           time of the resource record contained within this block with the
           smallest expiration time.
           If a records block includes shadow records, then the *maximum*
@@ -1740,8 +1744,10 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
 <dl class="dlParallel" id="section-4.3-12">
           <dt id="section-4.3-12.1">RR COUNT</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.3-12.2">
-          A 32-bit value containing the number of resource records which are
-          following in network byte order.<a href="#section-4.3-12.2" 
class="pilcrow">¶</a>
+          A 32-bit value containing the number of variable-length resource
+          records which are
+          following after this field in network byte order.
+          The resource record format is defined in <a href="#rrecords" 
class="xref">Section 3</a>.<a href="#section-4.3-12.2" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
           <dt id="section-4.3-12.3">PADDING</dt>
           <dd id="section-4.3-12.4">
@@ -1753,9 +1759,6 @@ async function addMetadata(){try{const 
e=document.styleSheets[0].cssRules;for(le
           other records.<a href="#section-4.3-12.4" class="pilcrow">¶</a>
 </dd>
         </dl>
-<p id="section-4.3-13">
-        is followed by a set of resource records with the respective
-        formats defined in <a href="#rrecords" class="xref">Section 3</a>.<a 
href="#section-4.3-13" class="pilcrow">¶</a></p>
 </section>
 </section>
 </div>
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.txt b/draft-schanzen-gns.txt
index 9bdd7ed..31a4672 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.txt
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.txt
@@ -143,24 +143,24 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System            
     July 2019
 
    where:
 
-   EXPIRATION  Denotes the absolute expiration date of the record.  In
-      microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1, 1970 in network
-      byte order.
+   EXPIRATION  denotes the absolute 64-bit expiration date of the
+      record.  In microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1, 1970
+      in network byte order.
 
-   DATA SIZE  The size of the DATA field in bytes and in network byte
-      order.
+   DATA SIZE  denotes the 32-bit size of the DATA field in bytes and in
+      network byte order.
 
-   TYPE  The resource record type.  This type can be one of the GNS
-      resource records as defined in Section 3 or a DNS record type as
-      defined in [RFC1035] or any of the complementary standardized DNS
-      resource record types.  This value must be stored in network byte
-      order.  Note that values below 2^16 are reserved for allocation
-      via IANA ([RFC6895]).
+   TYPE  is the 32-bit resource record type.  This type can be one of
+      the GNS resource records as defined in Section 3 or a DNS record
+      type as defined in [RFC1035] or any of the complementary
+      standardized DNS resource record types.  This value must be stored
+      in network byte order.  Note that values below 2^16 are reserved
+      for allocation via IANA ([RFC6895]).
 
-   FLAGS  Resource record flags.
+   FLAGS  is a 32-bit resource record flags field (see below).
 
-   DATA  The resource record data payload.  The contents are defined by
-      the respective type of the resource record.
+   DATA  the variable-length resource record data payload.  The contents
+      are defined by the respective type of the resource record.
 
 
 
@@ -322,14 +322,14 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System            
     July 2019
 
                                   Figure 6
 
-   PROTO  the protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp.  In network byte order.
-
-   SVC  the service of the boxed record, i.e. the port number.  In
-      network byte order.
-
-   TYPE  Record type of the boxed record.  In network byte order.
+   PROTO  the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp.  In network byte
+      order.
 
+   SVC  the 16-bit service value of the boxed record, i.e. the port
+      number.  In network byte order.
 
+   TYPE  is the 32-bit record type of the boxed record.  In network byte
+      order.
 
 
 
@@ -338,8 +338,8 @@ Schanzenbach, et al.     Expires 24 January 2020            
    [Page 6]
 Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System                 July 2019
 
 
-   RECORD DATA  This is the "DATA" format of TYPE as defined for the
-      respective TYPE in DNS.
+   RECORD DATA  is a variable length field containing the "DATA" format
+      of TYPE as defined for the respective TYPE in DNS.
 
 4.  Publishing records
 
@@ -366,29 +366,29 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System            
     July 2019
       derivation" as salt and the public zone key "zk" as initial keying
       material.
 
-   h  is the HKDF expansion result.  The expansion info is a
-      concatenation of the label and string "gns".
+   h  is the 512-bit HKDF expansion result.  The expansion info input is
+      a concatenation of the label and string "gns".
 
-   d  is the private zone key as defined in Section 2.
+   d  is the 256-bit private zone key as defined in Section 2.
 
-   label  under wich the resource records are published.
+   label  is a UTF-8 string under wich the resource records are
+      published.
 
-   d_h  is a private key derived from the "d" using the keying material
-      "h" (512 bit).
+   d_h  is a 256-bit private key derived from the "d" using the keying
+      material "h".
 
-   zk_h  is a public key derived from the zone key "zk" using the keying
-      material "h" (512 bit).
+   zk_h  is a 256-bit public key derived from the zone key "zk" using
+      the keying material "h".
 
    p  is the group order as defined in Section 2.
 
-   q  Is the DHT key under which the resource records block is
+   q  Is the 512-bit DHT key under which the resource records block is
       published.  It is the SHA512 hash over the public key "zk_h"
       corresponding to the derived private key "d_h".
 
 
 
 
-
 Schanzenbach, et al.     Expires 24 January 2020                [Page 7]
 
 Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System                 July 2019
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System              
   July 2019
       PUBLIC KEY field.  The signature is created using the derived
       private key "d_h" (see Section 4).
 
-   PUBLIC KEY  The 256-bit ECC public key "zk_h" to be used to verify
+   PUBLIC KEY  is the 256-bit public key "zk_h" to be used to verify
       SIGNATURE.  The wire format of this value is defined in [RFC8032],
       Section 5.1.5.
 
@@ -456,14 +456,14 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System            
     July 2019
    PURPOSE  A 32-bit signature purpose flag.  This field MUST be 15 (in
       network byte order).
 
-   EXPIRATION  The resource records block expiration time.  This is the
-      expiration time of the resource record contained within this block
-      with the smallest expiration time.  If a records block includes
-      shadow records, then the *maximum* expiration time of all shadow
-      records with matching type and the expiration times of the non-
-      shadow records is considered.  This is a 64-bit absolute date in
-      microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1, 1970 in network
-      byte order.
+   EXPIRATION  is the 64-bit resource records block expiration time.
+      This is the expiration time of the resource record contained
+      within this block with the smallest expiration time.  If a records
+      block includes shadow records, then the *maximum* expiration time
+      of all shadow records with matching type and the expiration times
+      of the non-shadow records is considered.  This is a 64-bit
+      absolute date in microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1,
+      1970 in network byte order.
 
    BDATA  The encrypted resource records with a total size of SIZE - 16.
 
@@ -590,8 +590,9 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System              
   July 2019
 
    where:
 
-   RR COUNT  A 32-bit value containing the number of resource records
-      which are following in network byte order.
+   RR COUNT  A 32-bit value containing the number of variable-length
+      resource records which are following after this field in network
+      byte order.  The resource record format is defined in Section 3.
 
    PADDING  The padding MUST contain the value 0 in all octets.  The
       padding MUST ensure that the size of the RDATA is a power of two.
@@ -599,9 +600,6 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System              
   July 2019
       are never padded.  Note that a record set with a PKEY record MUST
       NOT contain other records.
 
-   is followed by a set of resource records with the respective formats
-   defined in Section 3.
-
 5.  Internationalization and Character Encoding
 
    All labels in GNS are encoded in UTF-8 [RFC3629].  This does not
@@ -613,6 +611,8 @@ Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System              
   July 2019
 
 
 
+
+
 Schanzenbach, et al.     Expires 24 January 2020               [Page 11]
 
 Internet-Draft             The GNU Name System                 July 2019
diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index 5def3a0..d765653 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -145,17 +145,18 @@
    <dl>
     <dt>EXPIRATION</dt>
     <dd>
-     Denotes the absolute expiration date of the record.
+     denotes the absolute 64-bit expiration date of the record.
      In microseconds since midnight (0 hour), January 1, 1970 in network
      byte order.
     </dd>
     <dt>DATA SIZE</dt>
     <dd>
-      The size of the DATA field in bytes and in network byte order.
+      denotes the 32-bit size of the DATA field in bytes and in network byte
+      order.
     </dd>
     <dt>TYPE</dt>
     <dd>
-     The resource record type. This type can be one of the GNS resource
+     is the 32-bit resource record type. This type can be one of the GNS 
resource
      records as defined in <xref target="rrecords" /> or a DNS record
      type as defined in <xref target="RFC1035" /> or any of the
      complementary standardized DNS resource record types. This value must be
@@ -164,11 +165,12 @@
    </dd>
    <dt>FLAGS</dt>
    <dd>
-     Resource record flags.
+     is a 32-bit resource record flags field (see below).
    </dd>
    <dt>DATA</dt>
    <dd>
-     The resource record data payload. The contents are defined by the
+     the variable-length resource record data payload. The contents are defined
+     by the
      respective type of the resource record.
    </dd>
  </dl>
@@ -332,21 +334,21 @@
       <dl>
         <dt>PROTO</dt>
         <dd>
-          the protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp. In network byte order.
+          the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for tcp. In network byte order.
         </dd>
         <dt>SVC</dt>
         <dd>
-          the service of the boxed record, i.e. the port number. In network
-          byte order.
+          the 16-bit service value of the boxed record, i.e. the port number.
+          In network byte order.
         </dd>
         <dt>TYPE</dt>
         <dd>
-          Record type of the boxed record. In network byte order.
+          is the 32-bit record type of the boxed record. In network byte order.
         </dd>
         <dt>RECORD DATA</dt>
         <dd>
-          This is the "DATA" format of TYPE as defined for the respective TYPE
-          in DNS.
+          is a variable length field containing the "DATA" format of TYPE as
+          defined for the respective TYPE in DNS.
         </dd>
       </dl>
 </section>
@@ -387,26 +389,26 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>h</dt>
         <dd>
-          is the HKDF expansion result. The expansion info is a concatenation 
of
-          the label and string "gns".
+          is the 512-bit HKDF expansion result. The expansion info input is a
+          concatenation of the label and string "gns".
         </dd>
         <dt>d</dt>
         <dd>
-          is the private zone key as defined in <xref target="zones" />.
+          is the 256-bit private zone key as defined in <xref target="zones" 
/>.
         </dd>
         <dt>label</dt>
         <dd>
-          under wich the resource records are published.
+          is a UTF-8 string under wich the resource records are published.
         </dd>
         <dt>d_h</dt>
         <dd>
-          is a private key derived from the "d" using the
-          keying material "h" (512 bit).
+          is a 256-bit private key derived from the "d" using the
+          keying material "h".
         </dd>
         <dt>zk_h</dt>
         <dd>
-          is a public key derived from the zone key "zk" using the keying
-          material "h" (512 bit).
+          is a 256-bit public key derived from the zone key "zk" using the
+          keying material "h".
         </dd>
         <dt>p</dt>
         <dd>
@@ -414,7 +416,8 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>q</dt>
         <dd>
-          Is the DHT key under which the resource records block is published.
+          Is the 512-bit DHT key under which the resource records block is
+          published.
           It is the SHA512 hash over the public key "zk_h" corresponding to the
           derived private key "d_h".
         </dd>
@@ -469,7 +472,7 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>PUBLIC KEY</dt>
         <dd>
-          The 256-bit ECC public key "zk_h" to be used to verify SIGNATURE. The
+          is the 256-bit public key "zk_h" to be used to verify SIGNATURE. The
           wire format of this value is defined in <xref target="RFC8032" />,
           Section 5.1.5.
         </dd>
@@ -487,7 +490,8 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>EXPIRATION</dt>
         <dd>
-          The resource records block expiration time. This is the expiration
+          is the 64-bit resource records block expiration time. This is the
+          expiration
           time of the resource record contained within this block with the
           smallest expiration time.
           If a records block includes shadow records, then the *maximum*
@@ -616,8 +620,10 @@
       <dl>
         <dt>RR COUNT</dt>
         <dd>
-          A 32-bit value containing the number of resource records which are
-          following in network byte order.
+          A 32-bit value containing the number of variable-length resource
+          records which are
+          following after this field in network byte order.
+          The resource record format is defined in <xref target="rrecords" />.
         </dd>
         <dt>PADDING</dt>
         <dd>
@@ -630,10 +636,6 @@
         </dd>
 
       </dl>
-      <t>
-        is followed by a set of resource records with the respective
-        formats defined in <xref target="rrecords" />.
-      </t>
     </section>
   </section>
   <section anchor="encoding" numbered="true" toc="default">

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