[lsd0001] branch master updated: -minor English improvements

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     new 9c78d3f  -minor English improvements
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commit 9c78d3ff977835a443841bf58b8c4a5dcb9106e8
Author: Christian Grothoff <christian@grothoff.org>
AuthorDate: Wed Feb 2 13:03:19 2022 +0100

    -minor English improvements
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index cd3e1b3..1e1bae3 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -1839,7 +1839,7 @@ q := SHA-512 (ZKDF-Public(zk, label))
        <t>
          GNS clients MUST first try to interpret the top-level domain of
          a GNS name as a zone key representation (i.e. a zTLD).
-         If the top-level domain is indicated to be a label representation of
+         If the top-level domain is indicated to be a representation of
          a zone key with a supported zone type value, the start zone of
          the resolution process is implicitly given by the suffix of the name:
        </t>
@@ -1851,10 +1851,11 @@ Example name: www.example.<zTLD>
        <t>
          In GNS, users MAY own and manage their own zones.
          Each local zone SHOULD be associated with a single GNS label,
-   but users MAY choose to use longer names consisting of
-   multiple labels.
+         but users MAY choose to use longer names consisting of
+         multiple labels.
          If the name of a locally managed zone matches the suffix
-         of the name to be resolved, resolution MUST start from the respective 
local zone:
+         of the name to be resolved, resolution MUST start from the
+         respective local zone with the longest matching suffix:
        </t>
        <artwork name="" type="" align="left" alt=""><![CDATA[
 Example name: www.example.org

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