[taler-marketing] branch master updated: typos/FIXME

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commit 90a116f58a48fd07c660482a9d503c54ed03517f
Author: ms <ms@taler.net>
AuthorDate: Sat Feb 5 09:32:29 2022 +0100

    typos/FIXME
---
 2022-privacy/privacy.tex | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2022-privacy/privacy.tex b/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
index 25e47a2..e48e382 100644
--- a/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
+++ b/2022-privacy/privacy.tex
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ trusted third party that backs the tokens representing 
Bitcoin or
 Ether. By reducing the need for on-chain transactions, we expect that a
 Depolymerized DLT can in theory scale linearly with the available
 computational resources, primarily limited by the much slower transaction rate
-of the underlying DLT for inbound and outbound on-chain transacitons. The
+of the underlying DLT for inbound and outbound on-chain transactions. The
 resulting system would also provide durable transactions within milliseconds,
 making cryptocurrency payments significantly more practical. However, like
 with e-gold it would do nothing to mitigate the environmental cost of
@@ -696,10 +696,13 @@ to abandon this account-centric mindset, which will help 
them address
 privacy issues and help the Internet transcend surveillance capitalism.
 
 More specifically, the ECB needs to review its design approach for the Digital
-Euro and commit to granting financial soverenity to its constituents. Instead
+Euro and commit to granting financial sovereignty to its constituents. Instead
 of controlling the citizen's privacy and forcing a particular ECB App onto
+% FIXME: I'd suggest "users' phones",
+% unless it is really meant that one
+% user has multiple phones.
 CBDC user's phones, the ECB needs to design a Digital Euro based on respect
-for the citizen's sovereignity and self-responsibility.  A digital cash system
+for the citizen's sovereignty and self-responsibility.  A digital cash system
 can be build using privacy-preserving open protocols with Free Software
 reference implementations.  The resulting self-responsibility of citizens will
 address various key design challenges inherent to account-based designs,

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