[lsd0001] 01/02: avoid normative language

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commit a6c0867f49aa8fce6e278d44d1192f01896124a0
Author: Martin Schanzenbach <schanzen@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Fri Feb 4 23:27:53 2022 +0100

    avoid normative language
---
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index 255a5cb..f30d84b 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -2200,11 +2200,10 @@ NICK: john (Supplemental)
          </t>
          <t>
            Implementations MAY allow users to manage private records in
-           their zones.
-           Such private records should not be published in the storage,
-           making their data completely unavailable to non-local users.
-           Private records should still be considered just like
-           regular records when resolving labels in local zones.
+           their zones that are not published in the storage.
+           Private records are considered just like
+           regular records when resolving labels in local zones,
+           but their data is completely unavailable to non-local users.
          </t>
        </section>
        <section anchor="security_agility" numbered="true" toc="default">

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