[donau] branch master updated: 1.3: grammar fixes, rewording for clarification (part 2, forgot to stage)

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commit c73644a89b78ef860aa025bd8d9d46d52205764b
Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
AuthorDate: Thu Jan 23 15:40:47 2025 +0800

    1.3: grammar fixes, rewording for clarification (part 2, forgot to stage)
---
 doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex | 10 ++++------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex 
b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
index e765882..14c31fb 100644
--- a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
+++ b/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/intro.tex
@@ -198,13 +198,11 @@ their privacy as well as the current context allows.
 
 \subsection{Digital Cash}
 
-Digital cash~\cite{Chaum89} implemented by tokens issued using blind
+Digital cash~\cite{Chaum89} based on tokens issued using blind
 signatures~\cite{DemHeuz2022} has previously been
-suggested~\cite{donations2003blind} as a foundation for donations
-where the donor remains anonymous while the recipient is easily
-identified by the payment service provider. Payment systems based on
-digital cash are an adequate foundation for anonymous donations as the
-donor is not inherently traceable via the underlying payment.
+suggested~\cite{donations2003blind} as a foundation for donation systems that 
allow
+donors to remain anonymous but easily identify donation recipients.
+The untraceability of the underlying payment system for purchases easily 
provides untraceability in the donation context as well.
 
 Our current implementation is designed to work in conjunction with the
 GNU Taler~\cite{Taler} payment system.  GNU Taler is a {\em digital

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