Re: [PATCH] docs: Fix incorrect and potentially confusing language and minor formatting

[Glenn Washburn]

Ping. Wondering what might be holding this up from being merged?

Glenn

On Thu,  5 Sep 2024 20:37:11 -0500
Glenn Washburn <development@efficientek.com> wrote:

> Signed-off-by: Glenn Washburn <development@efficientek.com>
> ---
>  docs/grub.texi | 15 +++++++--------
>  1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/docs/grub.texi b/docs/grub.texi
> index 63e796a3a738..e6e5efa05e6c 100644
> --- a/docs/grub.texi
> +++ b/docs/grub.texi
> @@ -4538,11 +4538,12 @@ files.
>  
>  @node emunet_module
>  @section emunet
> -This module provides support for an emulated network card in GRUB.
> +This module provides support for networking in GRUB on the emu platform.
>  
>  @node emupci_module
>  @section emupci
> -This module provides support for an emulated PCI bus in GRUB.
> +This module provides support for accessing the PCI bus in GRUB on the emu
> +platform.
>  
>  @node erofs_module
>  @section erofs
> @@ -4784,8 +4785,8 @@ image support, and icon support.
>  
>  @node gfxterm_module
>  @section gfxterm
> -This module provides support for displaying a graphical terminal interface 
> from
> -GRUB.
> +This module provides support for displaying a terminal and menu interface 
> from
> +GRUB using graphics mode.
>  
>  @node gfxterm_background_module
>  @section gfxterm_background
> @@ -5105,8 +5106,7 @@ at the time of writing.
>  @node memdisk_module
>  @section memdisk
>  This module provides support for a memdisk device. A memdisk is a memory 
> mapped
> -emulated disk likely only possible in legacy environment such as with a 
> legacy
> -BIOS operating in 16-bit mode.
> +emulated disk.
>  
>  @node memrw_module
>  @section memrw
> @@ -5475,8 +5475,7 @@ like interface to some GRUB internal data.
>  
>  @node progress_module
>  @section progress
> -This module provides support for showing file loading progress to the
> -terminal.
> +This module provides support for showing file loading progress to the 
> terminal.
>  
>  @node pxe_module
>  @section pxe