01/02: website: package-channel: Fix typos, follow suggestions.

[Ludovic Courtès]

civodul pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix-artwork.

commit 0eb014a4bded0b798e4863e8b88b5c6963a93a2a
Author: Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org>
AuthorDate: Mon Jun 5 10:00:35 2023 +0200

    website: package-channel: Fix typos, follow suggestions.
    
    Thanks to Attila and bjc on #guix.
    
    * website/drafts/package-channel.md: Fix typos, follow suggestions.
---
 website/drafts/package-channel.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/drafts/package-channel.md 
b/website/drafts/package-channel.md
index aa42c05..2e45609 100644
--- a/website/drafts/package-channel.md
+++ b/website/drafts/package-channel.md
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ seen, will be to add a `guix.scm` at the root of the 
repository we’re
 interested in.  We’ll take [Guile](https://www.gnu.org/software/guile)
 as an example in this post: it’s written in Scheme (mostly) and C, and
 has a number of dependencies—a C compilation tool chain, C libraries,
-Autoconf and its friends, LaTeX, and so on.  The resulting `guix.scm` is
+Autoconf and its friends, LaTeX, and so on.  The resulting `guix.scm`
 looks like the usual [package
 definition](https://guix.gnu.org/manual/en/html_node/Defining-Packages.html),
 just without the `define-public` bit:
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ listed above, but also _implicit dependencies_ such as the 
GCC tool
 chain, GNU Make, sed, grep, and so on.  The chef’s recommendation:
 
 ```
-guix shell -CP
+guix shell --container --link-profile
 ```
 
 That gives a shell in an isolated container, and all the dependencies
@@ -224,9 +224,9 @@ and that’s exactly what we’re doing with our `guix.scm`.  
Granted, our
 Git repository is one package definition lost in a sea of code—in this
 case, Guile—, but still.
 
-Turns out we can indeed turn into a channel, but with one caveat: we
+Turns out we can indeed turn it into a channel, but with one caveat: we
 must create a separate directory for the `.scm` file(s) of our channel
-so that `guix pull` doesn’t end loading unrelated `.scm` files when
+so that `guix pull` doesn’t load unrelated `.scm` files when
 someone pulls the channel—and in Guile, there are lots of them!  So
 we’ll start like this, keeping a top-level `guix.scm` symlink for the
 sake of `guix shell`:
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ channels providing a number of *jobs*—one job per package 
defined in
 
 As for substitutes, they come for free!  As an example, our `guile`
 jobset being built on ci.guix.gnu.org, one automatically gets
-substitutes for it from ci.guix.gnu.org.  It’s as simple as this.
+substitutes for it from ci.guix.gnu.org.  It’s as simple as that.
 
 # Bonus: Build manifest