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[bug#62754] [PATCH v2] doc: Use G-Expressions for package definition exa
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Simon Tournier |
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[bug#62754] [PATCH v2] doc: Use G-Expressions for package definition example. |
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Fri, 05 May 2023 16:06:02 +0200 |
Hi,
On ven., 21 avril 2023 at 10:21, Nicolas Goaziou <mail@nicolasgoaziou.fr> wrote:
>> The new phase that is inserted is written as an anonymous procedure,
>> -introduced with @code{lambda*}; it honors the @code{outputs} parameter
>> -we have seen before. @xref{Build Utilities}, for more about the helpers
>> -used by this phase, and for more examples of @code{modify-phases}.
>> +introduced with @code{lambda*}. @xref{Build Utilities}, for more about
>> +the helpers used by this phase, and for more examples of
>> +@code{modify-phases}.
>
> I think it still makes sense to refer to `inputs'; it could be
> unsettling otherwise. Maybe something along those lines:
>
> ... introduced with @code{lambda*}; it looks for the @file{xmllint}
> executable in a @file{"/bin"} directory among package's inputs
> (@pxref{package Reference}). It also honors the @code{outputs}
> parameter we have seen before@xref{Build Utilities}, for more...
This tweak looks better to me. Well, Bruno could you send a v3? Or
Nicolas, could you amend the patch and directly apply it?
(Note the typo in « before@xref{Build Utilities} », I guess.)
Cheers,
simon
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