[bug#49610] [PATCH v3] services: guix: Add channels field.

[Simon Tournier]

Hi,

Sorry if I am missing something.  A comment about the consistency of the
manual. :-)  The section “Invoking guix pull” mentions:

        Specifically, @command{guix pull} downloads code from the @dfn{channels}
        (@pxref{Channels}) specified by one of the followings, in this order:

        @enumerate
        @item
        the @option{--channels} option;
        @item
        the user's @file{~/.config/guix/channels.scm} file;
        @item
        the system-wide @file{/etc/guix/channels.scm} file;
        @item
        the built-in default channels specified in the @code{%default-channels}
        variable.
        @end enumerate

On jeu., 25 mai 2023 at 20:12, Antero Mejr via Guix-patches via 
<guix-patches@gnu.org> wrote:

> -customized by defining @dfn{channels} in the
> -@file{~/.config/guix/channels.scm} file.  A channel specifies a URL and 
> branch
> +customized by defining @dfn{channels} in the @file{/etc/guix/channels.scm} 
> and
> +@file{~/.config/guix/channels.scm} files.  A channel specifies a URL and 
> branch

I find this wording confusing.  I would suggest:

--8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
A channel specifies a URL and branch customized by defining
@dfn{channels} in the @file{~/.config/guix/channels.scm} file, and/or
the @file{/etc/guix/channels.scm} file and/or the built-in default
specified in the @code{%default-channels} variable.  Guix honors the
channels file in that previous order (@xref{Invoking guix pull}).
--8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---

or something like that.  Keeping in mind that this part is not Guix
System specific.

WDYT?

Cheers,
simon