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[bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this
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Ludovic Courtès |
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[bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for. |
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Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:17:00 +0200 |
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Hi Florian,
Florian Pelz <pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de> skribis:
> * doc/guix.texi (Setting Up the Daemon): Specify intended audience.
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> Change-Id: I784c5f720aa87bddb6455e42181a1e9de5d7ec9a
Good idea.
> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running
s/the// (I think?)
> +However, some of us have reason to replace outdated daemon versions,
> +tweak it, perform builds on other machines (@pxref{Daemon Offload
> +Setup}) or start it manually in special environments like Chroots
I’d add a comma before “or”, and s/Chroots/``chroots''/
Otherwise LGTM, thanks!
Ludo’.