[Gzz-commits] gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa style.tex ...

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    gzz
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/02/10 00:35:31

Modified files:
        Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa: style.tex thesis.rst 

Log message:
        final version

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex.diff?tr1=1.3&tr2=1.4&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst.diff?tr1=1.9&tr2=1.10&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex
diff -u gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex:1.3 
gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex:1.4
--- gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex:1.3  Sun Feb  9 22:58:41 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/style.tex      Mon Feb 10 00:35:31 2003
@@ -1,11 +1,14 @@
 \author{Benja Fallenstein\\
 Thesis advisor: Christian Oldiges}
+\date{February 2003}
 \setlength{\textwidth}{14cm}
 %\setlength{\paperwidth}{21cm}
 \setlength{\oddsidemargin}{2.5cm}
 \setlength{\evensidemargin}{2.5cm}
-\setlength{\textheight}{24cm}
+\setlength{\textheight}{23cm}
+\setlength{\paperheight}{30cm}
 \setlength{\parskip}{1.5ex plus 0.5ex minus 0.5ex}
 \setlength{\parindent}{0em}
+\setlength{\footskip}{1em}
 \renewcommand{\baselinestretch}{1.2}
 \pagestyle{plain}
Index: gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst
diff -u gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst:1.9 
gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst:1.10
--- gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst:1.9 Sun Feb  9 22:58:41 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/misc/benja-diff-fa/thesis.rst     Mon Feb 10 00:35:31 2003
@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@
 on the public Internet. 
 
 Location-independent identifiers for documents 
-make such a system unnecessary; a peer-to-peer lookup system 
+make such notification unnecessary; peer-to-peer lookup
 can find documents wherever they are moved.
-Such a system also works for data not publicized on the Internet.
+This also works for data not publicized on the Internet.
 For example, if one email has a document attached to it, and another email
 links to this document, an index of locally stored documents
 by permanent identifier allows the system to follow the link.
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 notification mechanism like Microcosm's and Hyper-G's.
 
 *Tracking alternative versions* is an issue when documents are modified
-on several independent, unconnected systems, for example 
+on several independent, unconnected computers, for example 
 when a user takes a document home from work on a floppy disk;
 when they keep the same set of documents on their desktop and laptop,
 modifying them on each; when two people collaborate on a document, 
@@ -121,9 +121,9 @@
 An article based on this thesis is being prepared for submission
 to the Hypertext'03 conference [#]_.
 
-.. [#] See http://www.ht03.org.
+.. [#] http://www.ht03.org.
 
-Currently, Storm is partially implemented as a part Gzz, 
+Currently, Storm is partially implemented as a part of Gzz, 
 which uses Storm exclusively for all disk storage.
 Gzz is an implementation of Ted Nelson's zzstructure [zigzag-welcome]_,
 providing a platform for hypermedia-aware applications.
@@ -162,6 +162,7 @@
     Blocks.c = (0,0);
     vertically(55, foo, Blocks, Indexing);
 
+    
     dx = 80; dy = 60;
     XuStorage.c = Indexing.c + (-dx, -dy);
     z1 = Indexing.c + (dx, -dy);
@@ -169,8 +170,8 @@
     Diffs.c = z1 - (15, 15);
 
 
-Related Work
-============
+Review of related work
+======================
 
 Dangling links and alternative versions
 ---------------------------------------