[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/02/15 13:18:14

Modified files:
        storm          : article.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.192&tr2=1.193&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.192 manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.193
--- manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.192 Sat Feb 15 13:14:55 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/article.rst       Sat Feb 15 13:18:14 2003
@@ -106,10 +106,11 @@
 For example, if one email has a document attached to it, and another email
 links to this document, an index of locally stored documents
 by permanent identifier allows the system to follow the link.
-This would be extremely difficult to realize through a
-notification mechanism like Microcosm's and Hyper-G's.
+This would be difficult to realize through a
+notification mechanism.
 
-*Tracking alternative versions* is an issue when documents are modified
+*Tracking alternative versions*, on the other hand,
+is an issue when documents are modified
 on several independent, unconnected systems, for example 
 when a user takes a document home from work on a floppy disk;
 when they keep the same set of documents on their desktop and laptop,