[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink article.rst

[Tuukka Hastrup]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuukka Hastrup <address@hidden> 03/02/15 17:43:11

Modified files:
        UMLLink        : article.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/UMLLink/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.99&tr2=1.100&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
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diff -u manuscripts/UMLLink/article.rst:1.99 
manuscripts/UMLLink/article.rst:1.100
--- manuscripts/UMLLink/article.rst:1.99        Sat Feb 15 17:29:31 2003
+++ manuscripts/UMLLink/article.rst     Sat Feb 15 17:43:11 2003
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 .. Alternative title: "Free Software toolchain for bidirectional 
    linking between UML diagrams and Javadoc"
 
-.. :Stamp: $Id: article.rst,v 1.99 2003/02/15 22:29:31 benja Exp $
+.. :Stamp: $Id: article.rst,v 1.100 2003/02/15 22:43:11 tuukkah Exp $
 
 .. Points for HT people
    ====================
@@ -152,15 +152,15 @@
 - establish and document requirements
 - design and document the module structure
 - design and document the module interfaces
-- design and document the uses hierarchy
+- design and document the use hierarchy
 - design and document the module internal structures
 - write programs
 - maintain (redesign and redevelopment, keeping documentation
-  up to date).
+  up to date)
 
 It should be clear that documentation plays a major role in the
-ideal software design process, and that there are several different
-types of documentation at different levels of abstraction. 
+ideal software design process, and at different levels of abstraction 
+the type of documentation varies. 
 The steps listed above should produce
 documentation which records requirements and design decisions, and
 could be referenced throughout the building of the
@@ -930,7 +930,7 @@
 
 Earlier concept-based navigation and map-based navigation have added 
 horizontal links on top of hierarchical hypertext [brusilovsky02-mapnav]_. 
-The structure we discuss in this paper is similar as the diagram becomes a
+The structure we discussed in this paper is similar as the diagram becomes a
 navigational node, but we don't rely on keywords or heuristics in link 
 creation. 
 Further, as the diagram is shown inside a web page, it functions as 
@@ -960,9 +960,9 @@
 On the other hand, there are also arguments against MetaPost:
 the error messages received on erroneous input to the UML tool
 are difficult to decipher due to the translation layer between.
-Abandoning MetaPost might also speed up the compiling process.
+Abandoning MetaPost might also speed up the compilation process.
 
-Once some of these issues are resolved, we are planning
+We plan, once some of these issues are resolved, 
 to release the glue code as a standalone Free Software package.
 
 Finally, we'd like to point out that this tool could benefit from a less 
@@ -975,7 +975,7 @@
 ===============
 
 The authors would like to thank Toni Alatalo for discussions regarding
-this manuscript.
+UML software and this manuscript.
 
 .. bibliography:: gzigzag