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[Hermanni Hyytiälä]

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--- gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.65       Mon Feb 
24 08:36:48 2003
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08:44:42 2003
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 form the network. Indeed, all scroll blocks' identifiers are
 self-certifying. However, this not very efficient if we want to
 obtain large amounts of data. One possibility is to use tree-based
-hash techiques (e.g., \cite{merkle87hashtree}, \cite{\cite{mohr02thex}), 
+hash techiques (e.g., \cite{merkle87hashtree}, \cite{mohr02thex}), 
 which makes possible multisource downloads. Tree based hash functions can be 
used 
 to verify fixed length segments of data file, instead of whole data file. 
 Currently, Shareaza \cite{shareazaurl}, Overnet \cite{overneturl} and 
 eDonkey2000 \cite{edonkey2kurl} uses tree based hashing for validating 
-segments of a data file. Another options for more efficient data
-fething is use multisource downloading (\cite{bittorrenturl}) and online
-codes (\cite{maymounkov03ratelesscodes}).
+segments of a data file. Another option, for more efficient data
+fething, is use to standard multisource downloading \cite{bittorrenturl} and 
+online codes \cite{maymounkov03ratelesscodes}.
 
-Multisource downloads can be very useful when video, images or sound
-is stored using Storm storage model. However, further research is
+Multisource downloads can be very useful when media such as video, images 
+or sound is stored under Storm storage model. However, further research is
 required.
 
 For more detailed discussion about Storm's storage model, see