[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex pipe.mp

[Janne V. Kujala]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Janne V. Kujala <address@hidden>        03/04/24 08:11:09

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex pipe.mp 

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        revising

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.128&tr2=1.129&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp.diff?tr1=1.1.1.1&tr2=1.2&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.128 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.129
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.128   Tue Apr 22 11:07:28 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Thu Apr 24 08:11:09 2003
@@ -53,6 +53,31 @@
 
 \begin{abstract}
 
+%FIXME: more references of texture generation 
+
+%FIXME: Justify why adding unique background will help recognise a document 
+%from a fragment and enhance text readability. (Optional)
+
+%FIXME: Add a concise description of how fig. 3 works in the paper.
+
+%FIXME: The order and the index of the figures are not coincident. 
+
+%FIXME: Make the titles of figures shorter, and explain the details in the 
+%context.(Optional)
+
+%FIXME: Fig 1, a): Mark the link clearer. Try to avoid line crossing.
+
+%FIXME: The citation might be better if only a unified format is used.  
+%E.g., "point (see, e.g., Heeger[16])" -> "point[16]" . (Optional)
+%XXX: is there a reason for inserting "], [" between citations?
+
+%FIXME: The fonts should be uniform in the topics of figure 1 and table 1.
+
+%FIXME: Revise the spelling and grammar errors, esp. grammar of long sentences.
+
+
+%FIXME: more concise and exact explanations in some sections
+%FIXME: what are this paper's spefific contributions? (e.g., in Sec. 4)
 
 %NO NEED FOR PERFECT RECALL - JUST A CUE
 
@@ -250,11 +275,11 @@
 %In addition to being drawn by hand or scanned,
 Textures have been synthesized in several ways: 
procedurally\cite{perlin-noise-intro},
 using 
-other textures as a starting point 
-(see, e.g., Heeger\cite{heeger95pyramid}),
+other textures as a starting point\cite{heeger95pyramid},
 perceptually, for visualizing surface 
orientation\cite{schweitzer83texturing,interrante97illustrating} and scalar or 
vector fields\cite{ware95texture},
 and statistically, as samples from a probability distribution on a random field
 \cite{cross83markov,geman84stochastic}.
+% FIXME: grammar
 % XXX: there's overlap between the enumerated cases
 
 %Textures have also been modeled statistically, 
@@ -283,20 +308,24 @@
 In these models, a bank of linear filters is applied to the texture followed
 by a nonlinearity and then another set of filters to extract features
 (see, e.g., Heeger\cite{heeger95pyramid}).
+%FIXME: grammar and citation
 There is also physiological evidence of the filtering processes:
 %The first stages 
 %of visual perception 
 %are fairly well known
 in the visual cortex, there are cells sensitive to different 
 frequencies, orientations, and locations in the visual field
-(see, e.g.,~Bruce et al\cite{bruce96visualperception}).
+%(see, e.g.,~Bruce et al
+\cite{bruce96visualperception}.
 
 On a higher level, the correlations between local features are combined 
 by forming contours and possibly
-other higher-level constructions (see, e.g., \cite{saarinen97integration}). 
+other higher-level constructions %(see, e.g.,
+\cite{saarinen97integration}. 
 These higher levels are not yet thoroughly understood;
 some theories
-(see, e.g., Biederman\cite{biederman87})
+%(see, e.g., Biederman%
+\cite{biederman87}
 assume certain primitive shapes whose 
 structure facilitates recognition.
 
@@ -1050,6 +1079,7 @@
 with the selected repeating unit. For example, a texture can
 repeat multiple times inside the repeating unit, or can be skewed
 w.r.t.~the repeating unit. 
+%FIXME: spell out w.r.t?(Optional)
 Again, a heuristic distribution is used which does not skew or scale
 the basis texture too much too often.
 
Index: manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp:1.1 manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp:1.2
--- manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp:1.1       Fri Dec  6 10:55:59 2002
+++ manuscripts/Paper/pipe.mp   Thu Apr 24 08:11:09 2003
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
     drawgrid((x4, y1), (0,-60), 5, (60,0), 1);
     combprogs[1] = (x4, y1-60);
 
-    label.urt(btex \hbox to 2cm{\vbox{\noindent Combiner\\params}} 
etex,(x3+20,y5));
+    label.urt(btex \hbox to 2cm{\vbox{\noindent Combiner\\parameters}} 
etex,(x3+20,y5));
        drawgrid((x3+20, y5), (0,-40), 3, (40,0), 2);
        combparams[1] = (x3+20, y5-40);