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[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst
From: |
Tuomas J. Lukka |
Subject: |
[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst |
Date: |
Thu, 29 May 2003 13:22:19 -0400 |
CVSROOT: /cvsroot/gzz
Module name: manuscripts
Changes by: Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden> 03/05/29 13:22:18
Modified files:
UMLLink : short-paper.rst
Log message:
Twids - too long again
CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.47&tr2=1.48&r1=text&r2=text
Patches:
Index: manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.47
manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.48
--- manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst:1.47 Thu May 29 12:44:46 2003
+++ manuscripts/UMLLink/short-paper.rst Thu May 29 13:22:18 2003
@@ -94,14 +94,15 @@
While the class is easily found through the package and class lists
when looking for a class representing cryptographical public keys,
the javadoc is not terribly useful: it lacks the information
-there on how to create objects that implement this interface.
-Currently, the only relevant links are on an accompanying ``Use`` page,
-which lists all the references to this interface elsewhere in the
+on how to create objects that implement this interface.
+The only relevant links are on an accompanying ``Use`` page,
+which lists all the references to this interface in any method
+prototypes elsewhere in the
documentation.
-Further, those lists lack information about the contextual importance of
-the mentionings --- the methods for
-creating a ``PublicKey`` are listed alongside eg. the methods
-that return a ``PublicKey`` contained in another object.
+The list does not give information about the contextual importance of
+the items --- the methods for
+creating a ``PublicKey`` are listed alongside eg. the accessor methods
+that return a ``PublicKey`` contained in another, unrelated object.
Far more helpful would be a link to the design
documentation, even just a diagram showing the intended
@@ -206,7 +207,7 @@
team. Each UML diagram is meant to expose a particular aspect
of the design.
Therefore
-a single program element often appears on several distinct diagrams,
+a single program element often appears on several separate diagrams
that
together create a multicontext view for the element.
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, (continued)
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Asko Soukka, 2003/05/23
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/26
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuukka Hastrup, 2003/05/28
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuukka Hastrup, 2003/05/28
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuukka Hastrup, 2003/05/28
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuukka Hastrup, 2003/05/28
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/28
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/29
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/29
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/29
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst,
Tuomas J. Lukka <=
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30
- [Gzz-commits] manuscripts/UMLLink short-paper.rst, Tuomas J. Lukka, 2003/05/30