[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.145   Thu Sep 18 14:46:38 2003
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 6 Conclusions
 =============
 
+We have presented ...
+
 This has been a difficult article to write,
 partly because we are explaining both the ideas
 of Nelson and our own ideas and views of Nelson's
 ideas in the same article.
-To clarify, ...
 
+To clarify, the following aspects are
 Nelson's:
 
     - zzStructure
 
     - basic row/col focus+context views of zzStructure
 
-    - the basic idea of applitudes and orthogonal
+    - the fundamental idea of applitudes and orthogonal
       structure
 
     - transpointing windows
 
     - Xanalogical referential fluid media
 
-Originating at our group, during or after the collaboration
+And the following ones originate at our group, 
+during or after the collaboration
 with Nelson:
 
     - RDF implementation of hyperstructure using