[Office-commits] r9952 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Fri Oct  2 12:08:58 2009
New Revision: 9952

Log:
web commit by peterb

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo.mdwn    Fri Oct  2 12:06:21 2009        
(r9951)
+++ trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo.mdwn    Fri Oct  2 12:08:58 2009        
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@@ -21,15 +21,14 @@
 
 Free software such as the GNU/Linux operating system and the office
 productivity suite, OpenOffice.org, are both readily available and
-easy-to-use. GNU/Linux distributions come with thousands of free software 
applications, including complete accounting and fundraising solutions.
+easy-to-use. GNU/Linux distributions come with thousands of free software 
applications, including complete accounting and fundraising solutions suitable 
for charities.
 
 FSF campaigns manager Matt Lee added, "Charities, NGOs, and other
 non-profit organizations that choose proprietary software are
 undertaking bad public policy, often through ignorance or misplaced
 values. We hope to alert these decision makers to the positive
 contribution they can make to society by switching their organizations
-to free software. I hope these groups will make a public decision to
-show their committment to freedom and join a growing list of organizations
+to free software. I hope these groups will make a public policy committment to 
freedom and join a growing list of organizations
 who understand that sinking money and time into proprietary software
 is inconsistent with the core values of freedom and progress."