[Pingus-CVS] CVS: Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml,1.14,1.15 snow10-grumbel.xml,1.10,1.11 snow19-grumbel.xml,1.16,1.17 snow8-grumbel.xml,1.13,1.14 snow9-grumbel.xml,1.12,1.13 solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml,1.10,1.11

[torangan]

Update of /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial
In directory dark:/tmp/cvs-serv14838/data/levels/tutorial

Modified Files:
        floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml snow10-grumbel.xml 
        snow19-grumbel.xml snow8-grumbel.xml snow9-grumbel.xml 
        solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml 
Log Message:
some more language fixes


Index: floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -d -r1.14 -r1.15
--- floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml        16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.14
+++ floater-tutorial-grumbel.xml        17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.15
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <levelname lang="fr">Flotte ou Meurt</levelname>
     <levelname lang="sr">Lebdi ili umri</levelname>
 
-    <description lang="en">Well done in mission one, now let's start the next 
one. This
+    <description lang="en">Well done in mission one! Now let's start the next 
one. This
                            time you will need to equip your Pingus with a 
little propeller,
                            so that they can float to the ground smoothly. If 
Pingus fall too
                            far, they will not be able to survive the fall, so 
keep your eyes open!

Index: snow10-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/snow10-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -d -r1.10 -r1.11
--- snow10-grumbel.xml  16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.10
+++ snow10-grumbel.xml  17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.11
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <levelname lang="fr">Ile de la Panique (float/bash)</levelname>
     <levelname lang="sr">Ostrvo panike (lebdi/glodaj)</levelname>
 
-    <description lang="en">While the previous levels have not required much 
fast action from
+    <description lang="en">While the previous levels have not required much 
quick action from
                            you, this one gets a bit trickier. The Pingus are 
coming
                            out of two entrances in parallel and it is your job 
to coordinate
                            both of these groups wisely.

Index: snow19-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/snow19-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -d -r1.16 -r1.17
--- snow19-grumbel.xml  16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.16
+++ snow19-grumbel.xml  17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.17
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <levelname lang="fr">Apprenez a utiliser le pont</levelname>
     <levelname lang="sr">Nauci da koristis most</levelname>
 
-    <description lang="en">If no Jumper is at hand and a large hole needs to 
be passed a bridge
+    <description lang="en">If no Jumper is at hand and a large hole needs to 
be passed, a bridge
                           can be pretty helpful. It takes some time to build, 
but unlike the
                           jumper action it allows following Pingus to reach 
the other end too.
     </description>

Index: snow8-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/snow8-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -d -r1.13 -r1.14
--- snow8-grumbel.xml   16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.13
+++ snow8-grumbel.xml   17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.14
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <levelname lang="sr">Kopaj i lebdi, samo nemoj pasti i razbiti 
se</levelname>
 
     <description lang="en">Unlike the first two levels, you have two actions 
available in
-                           this level. Your job is again simple, select an 
action at the panel
+                           this level. Your job is again simple: select an 
action at the panel
                            on the left and apply it to the Pingus so that they 
will be able
                            to reach the exit. Make sure that not too many of 
them die.
     </description>

Index: snow9-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/snow9-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- snow9-grumbel.xml   16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.12
+++ snow9-grumbel.xml   17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.13
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <levelname lang="sr">Kopanje, glodanje i drugi problemi</levelname>
 
     <description lang="en">The more levels you master, the more difficult they 
will get,
-                           but don't panic this one is still pretty easy. Just 
use the stuff that
+                           but don't panic, as this one is still pretty easy. 
Just use the stuff that
                            you've learned in the previous levels and you 
shouldn't have many
                            problems. If you think you've reached a situation 
from which you can
                            no longer solve the level, double click the 
armageddon button at the

Index: solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/data/levels/tutorial/solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -d -r1.10 -r1.11
--- solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml  16 Apr 2003 20:18:26 -0000      1.10
+++ solid-tutorial-grumbel.xml  17 Apr 2003 07:15:35 -0000      1.11
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
     <description lang="en">As you have learned in earlier levels your Pingus 
can dig through
                            basically any terrain, but there is one material 
which they can't
                            penetrate and that is steal. These regions are 
marked
-                           dark grey on the levelmap and cannot be destroyed, 
so find a way
-                           around them.
+                           dark grey on the levelmap and cannot be destroyed, 
so
+                          you must find a way around them.
     </description>
     <description lang="de">Wie du in den früheren Levels gelernt hast, kann 
ein Pingu durch
                            fast alles graben, aber es gibt etwas, dass sie 
nicht durchdringen