[Pingus-CVS] CVS: Games/Pingus/src credits.cxx,1.33,1.34 result_screen.cxx,1.15,1.16 screenshot.cxx,1.12,1.13story.cxx,1.27,1.28

[torangan]

Update of /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/src
In directory dark:/tmp/cvs-serv17217/src

Modified Files:
        credits.cxx result_screen.cxx screenshot.cxx story.cxx 
Log Message:
spelling fixes by Andy Balaam


Index: credits.cxx
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/src/credits.cxx,v
retrieving revision 1.33
retrieving revision 1.34
diff -u -d -r1.33 -r1.34
--- credits.cxx 21 Apr 2003 18:07:21 -0000      1.33
+++ credits.cxx 23 Apr 2003 16:16:37 -0000      1.34
@@ -105,6 +105,7 @@
   credits.push_back(_("-Special"));
   credits.push_back(_("-Thanks to"));
   credits.push_back("_Adam Gregory");
+  credits.push_back("_Andy Balaam");
   credits.push_back("_Bernhard Trummer");
   credits.push_back("_Cagri Coltekin");
   credits.push_back("_David Fauthoux");

Index: result_screen.cxx
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/src/result_screen.cxx,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -d -r1.15 -r1.16
--- result_screen.cxx   19 Apr 2003 10:23:17 -0000      1.15
+++ result_screen.cxx   23 Apr 2003 16:16:37 -0000      1.16
@@ -186,30 +186,30 @@
   if (result.success())
     {
       if (result.killed == 0 && result.saved == result.total)
-        message = _("Perfect! You saved everybody possibly, great!");
+        message = _("Perfect! You saved everyone possible - great!");
       else if (result.killed == 0)
-        message = _("None got killed, pretty good work");
+        message = _("No-one got killed, pretty good work.");
       else if (result.saved == result.needed)
-        message = _("You saved just what you needed, you made it, but\n"
+        message = _("You saved exactly what you needed - you made it, but\n"
                     "maybe you can do better?");
       else if (result.killed >= 5)
-        message = _("Not everybody could get saved, but still good work!");
+        message = _("Not everybody was saved, but still good work!");
       else
-        message = _("What can I say, you made it, congratulations!");
+        message = _("What can I say, you made it - congratulations!");
     }
   else
     {
       if (result.killed == result.total)
         message = _("You killed everybody, not good.");
       else if (result.saved == 0)
-        message = _("None got saved, I know you can do better.");
+        message = _("No-one got saved - I know you can do better.");
       else if (result.saved > 0)
-        message = _("You didn't saved enough, but still saved a few, next\n"
-                    "time you might be better.");
+        message = _("You didn't save enough, but you saved a few.  Next\n"
+                    "time you might do better.");
       else if (result.saved + 1 >= result.needed)
-        message = _("Only one more and you would have made it, try again!");
+        message = _("Only one more and you would have made it - try again!");
       else if (result.saved + 5 >= result.needed)
-        message = _("Only a handfull more and you would have made it, try 
again!");
+        message = _("Only a handful more and you would have made it - try 
again!");
       else
         message = _("Better luck next time!");
     }

Index: screenshot.cxx
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/src/screenshot.cxx,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- screenshot.cxx      19 Apr 2003 10:23:17 -0000      1.12
+++ screenshot.cxx      23 Apr 2003 16:16:37 -0000      1.13
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 
       std::cout << _("Screenshot: Saving screenshot to: ") << filename << 
std::endl;
       save_target_to_file(target, filename);
-      std::cout << _("Screnshot: Screenshot is done.") << std::endl;
+      std::cout << _("Screenshot: Screenshot is done.") << std::endl;
 
       return filename;
     }

Index: story.cxx
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/lib/cvs/Games/Pingus/src/story.cxx,v
retrieving revision 1.27
retrieving revision 1.28
diff -u -d -r1.27 -r1.28
--- story.cxx   21 Apr 2003 18:07:21 -0000      1.27
+++ story.cxx   23 Apr 2003 16:16:37 -0000      1.28
@@ -64,9 +64,9 @@
     (StoryPage
      (ResDescriptor("Story/credits3", "story"),
       StringFormat::break_line(
-      _("So the Pingus set out and constructed some large floats, enough\n"
+      _("So the Pingus set out and constructed some large rafts, enough\n"
         "to carry them all. After also packing a bunch of provisions\n"
-        "they were prepared to start of their journey and leave\n"
+        "they were prepared to start their journey and leave\n"
         "their familiar ground and enter the unknown parts of the world.\n"), 
570, Fonts::chalk_normal)
         ));
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
     (StoryPage
      (ResDescriptor("Story/credits4", "story"),
       StringFormat::break_line(
-      _("So the Pingus sat on their float, worrying about what's to come and\n"
+      _("So the Pingus sit on their raft, worrying about what's to come and\n"
         "where to go, while floating into the sunset.\n"
         "\n"
         "To be continued..."), 570, Fonts::chalk_normal)
@@ -94,14 +94,14 @@
       _("For a long time, the Pingus have lived happily in peace on the\n"
         "South Pole along with all the other animals. Everything was in\n"
         "balance and it seemed like nothing could disrupt their peace.  The\n"
-        "Pingus where happy and it seemed like this could never end.\n"), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
+        "Pingus were happy and it seemed like this could never end.\n"), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
        ));
 
   intro.pages.push_back
     (StoryPage
      (ResDescriptor("Story/story1", "story"),
       StringFormat::break_line(
-      _("But then one day, things began to change slowly, the sky got darker\n"
+      _("But then one day, things began to change slowly: the sky got darker\n"
         "and the earth got warmer. Firstly, they thought this was just a\n"
         "normal fluctuation in the world's climate, but things seemed to get\n"
         "worse and worse with every year."), 570, Fonts::chalk_normal)
@@ -114,8 +114,8 @@
       StringFormat::break_line(
       _("The snow began to melt away in a few areas and food became an\n"
         "issue. Other animals tried to leave the region to search\n"
-        "for colder areas, but the Pingus knew that this wouldn't help,\n"
-        "they knew that they had to do something about this."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
+        "for colder areas, but the Pingus knew that this wouldn't help:\n"
+        "they knew that they had to do something about it."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
        ));
 
   intro.pages.push_back
@@ -124,8 +124,8 @@
       StringFormat::break_line(
       _("So the circle of the eldest came together to decide what to do\n"
         "about it. They decided to send out an expedition around the world\n"
-        "to find the cause for this warming. The expedition consisted of\n"
-        "hundreds of the bravest Pingus around on the South Pole."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
+        "to find the cause of this warming. The expedition consisted of\n"
+        "hundreds of the bravest Pingus on the South Pole."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
        ));
 
   intro.pages.push_back
@@ -136,25 +136,25 @@
         "world. Since the journey will be dangerous and difficult, your\n"
         "first goal is the Island of Mogorok, also known as the Tutorial\n"
         "Island. According to the eldest, this island has always been the\n"
-        "first stop of Pingus that were send out into the world."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
+        "first stop of Pingus that were sent out into the world."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
        ));
 
   intro.pages.push_back
     (StoryPage
      (ResDescriptor("Story/story5", "story"),
       StringFormat::break_line(
-      _("The island consists of many areas which are ideal to train the\n"
-        "abilities of the Pingus. The Pingus can train their ability\n"
-        "to build bridges, climb, bash and all the rest of their talents\n"
-        "which they will need on their long and dangerous journey."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
+      _("The island consists of many areas that are ideal to teach the\n"
+        "Pingus their abilities. The Pingus can learn to build\n"
+        "bridges, climb, bash and use many other talents which they\n"
+        "will need on their long and dangerous journey."), 570, 
Fonts::chalk_normal)
        ));
 
   intro.pages.push_back
     (StoryPage
      (ResDescriptor("Story/story6", "story"),
       StringFormat::break_line(
-      _("You may, on the other hand, practice there your ability to\n"
-        "command and guide the Pingus. You can also get familiar with\n"
+      _("While there, you can practice your abilities in commanding\n"
+        "and guiding the Pingus. You can also get familiar with\n"
         "all the abilities the Pingus provide and learn to master them,\n"
         "since you will need all of them on your journey around the\n"
         "world."), 570, Fonts::chalk_normal)