Re: [Quilt-dev] [patch 23/26] Wordsmith Environment section.

[Jean Delvare]

On Sat, 16 Jun 2018 12:22:55 -0400, address@hidden wrote:
> * Remove dependent clause used as a topic transition when this material
>   was not in its own section.

Agreed, as mentioned previously.

> * Make tagged paragraphs readable as paragraphs (try it aloud).

I'm still not happy with this change, same as patch 21.

> * Provide examples of when $EDITOR is used.

Good idea.

> * Semicolons separate independent clauses (when not used to separate
>   elements of a list containing commas), therefore convert a fragment to
>   an independent clause.

Fine with me.

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Jean Delvare
SUSE L3 Support