[Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content contact.txt

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       10/03/27 22:34:57

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content: contact.txt 

Log message:
        English (re)wording

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/contact.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.10&r2=1.11

Patches:
Index: contact.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/contact.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -b -r1.10 -r1.11
--- contact.txt 21 May 2007 19:59:17 -0000      1.10
+++ contact.txt 27 Mar 2010 22:34:57 -0000      1.11
@@ -1,20 +1,21 @@
 <h2>E-mail contact</h2>
 
-<p>Note: If you need to get in touch with the developers of a
-particular project hosted here, please <em>check the project's page</em>
-(e.g. <code>/projects/myprojecname</code>) to find out the appropriate
+<p>First: If you need to get in touch with the developers of a particular
+project hosted on Savannah, please <b>check specific project page</b>
+(e.g., <code>/projects/projname</code>) to find out the appropriate
 way to contact them.</p>
 
-<p>For general help with using the service, you can subscribe to the
-<strong>users mailing lists</strong> at <a
-href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users</a>
-and send mail to <a
-href="mailto:address@hidden";>address@hidden</a> <span style="font-size: 
smaller">(mails
-from non-members are accepted but moderated on a daily basis)</span>.</p>
+<p>For help with using Savannah in general (not a specific project), you
+can subscribe to the <a
+href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users
+mailing list</a> and/or send mail to <a
+href="mailto:address@hidden";>address@hidden</a> <span
+style="font-size: smaller">(mails from non-members are accepted but
+may incur a moderation delay)</span>.</p>
 
-<p>If you are the developer of one of the projects hosted here and you
-want to get in touch with the maintainers of this server (Savannah)
-you can then contact the <strong>Savannah Hackers</strong> by submitting a 
+<p>If you are a developer of a project hosted at Savannah and want to
+get in touch with the Savannah maintainers you can contact the
+<strong>Savannah hackers</strong> by submitting a
 
 <?php
 print '<a 
href="'.$GLOBALS['sys_home'].'support/?func=addsupport&amp;group='.$GLOBALS['sys_unix_group_name'].'">[support
 request]</a>';
@@ -23,11 +24,11 @@
 or sending mail to <a
 href="mailto:address@hidden";>address@hidden</a>
 (after checking the archives at <a
-href="http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/savannah-hackers/";>http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/savannah-hackers/</a>)
-- when you want to contact us about security or confidential issues,
-you may also use the address@hidden list.</p>
+href="http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/savannah-hackers/";>http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/savannah-hackers</a>).
+If you want to contact us about security or confidential issues,
+you may use the address@hidden list.</p>
 
-<p>If you have found a bug in the Savane software (the software used
-to run this server), or you would like to request a new feature, you
-should use the Bugs system in <a
-href="http://gna.org/projects/savane";>Project Savane</a>.</p>
+<p>If you have found a bug in the Savane software (the software used to
+run Savannah), or you would like to request a new feature, please use
+the Bugs system in <a href="http://gna.org/projects/savane";>Project
+Savane</a>.</p>