[Savannah-cvs] [33] wording

[Karl Berry Test]

Revision: 33
          http://svn.sv.gnu.org/viewvc/?view=rev&root=administration&revision=33
Author:   karltest
Date:     2013-09-03 00:30:16 +0000 (Tue, 03 Sep 2013)
Log Message:
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wording

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sviki/ApprovingSubmission.mdwn

Modified: trunk/sviki/ApprovingSubmission.mdwn
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--- trunk/sviki/ApprovingSubmission.mdwn        2013-09-03 00:27:26 UTC (rev 32)
+++ trunk/sviki/ApprovingSubmission.mdwn        2013-09-03 00:30:16 UTC (rev 33)
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
-As Savannah 'superuser' (in the web interface):
+As Savannah superuser, that is, do "become superuser" (in the main left
+hand menu bar) in the web interface:
 
 -   click on the 'Group Administration' link in the original submission
     of this tracker item.
@@ -6,8 +7,8 @@
     project it *must* be listed in
     fencepost.gnu.org:/gd/gnuorg/maintainers; otherwise, the project
     must be evaluated first per http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html.
-    Or it can be evaluated and approved as a non-GNU project (usually
-    submitters choose "official GNU" by mistake).
+    Or it can be evaluated and approved as a non-GNU project; usually
+    submitters choose "official GNU" by mistake, please discuss with them.
 -   if all is ok, set the status to 'Active' and save (click the
     'Update' button) if necessary. Do this before any of the following
     steps.
@@ -19,9 +20,9 @@
 
 Following that it will take approximately one hour for the cron jobs to
 run and the project to be fully populated (for the sake of, e.g.,
-[[ImportingCVSRepository]]): replicate Savannah DB groups into the
-'accounts' system, replicate the groups to other savannah hosts, create
-repositories in 'vcs-noshell'.
+[[ImportingCVSRepository]]): make groups in the database-based accounts
+system, replicate the groups to Savannah hosts, create
+repositories on vcs, etc.
 
 Of course, do not approve the project unless it actually meets our
 requirements. These are spelled out at