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[Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content/register req...


From: karl
Subject: [Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content/register req...
Date: Sun, 26 Oct 2014 23:46:28 +0000

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     karl <karl>     14/10/26 23:46:28

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content/register: requirements.txt 

Log message:
        typos

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/register/requirements.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.16&r2=1.17

Patches:
Index: requirements.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/register/requirements.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -b -r1.16 -r1.17
--- requirements.txt    24 Aug 2014 22:37:39 -0000      1.16
+++ requirements.txt    26 Oct 2014 23:46:28 -0000      1.17
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
 <p>The space given to you on this server is given for the expressed
 purpose of advancing free software that can run in free operating systems,
-documenting that kind of software or creating free educational textbooks.
+documenting such software, or creating free educational textbooks.
 Using it to host or advertise non-free software is considered harmful to
 free software. For more information, please read the <a
 href=http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/philosophy.html target="_blank">Philosophy
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 
 <p>The program should deliver its full functionality and convenience on a
 completely free platform based on a free operating system, such as
-GNU/Linux, working entirely with other free software.  Otherwise it
+GNU/Linux, working entirely with other free software.  Otherwise, it
 would be an inducement to install non-free operating systems or other
 non-free software.</p>
 
@@ -48,11 +48,11 @@
 
 <h3>No non-free formats</h3>
 
-<p>Using a format such as Flash, RealPlayer and Quicktime, that can only
+<p>Using a format such as Flash, RealPlayer and QuickTime, that can only
 be created or played using non-free software is, in effect, to
 recommend use of that non-free player software.  When the free
 software alternative is not as good as the proprietary one, using such
-a format is also implicitely recommending the non-free solution.
+a format is also implicitly recommending the non-free solution.
 Therefore, your package shouldn't contain or recommend materials in
 these non-free formats.</p>
 
@@ -64,7 +64,6 @@
 fan items about your free software project that you sell directly to
 the users.</p>
 
-
 <h3>Speaking about free software</h3>
 
 <p>Savannah is a free software hosting site: we host projects such as
@@ -77,11 +76,11 @@
 <p>Savannah is part of the GNU Project, developer of the free software
 operating system GNU.  The GNU/Linux system (GNU with Linux as the
 kernel) runs Savannah now.  While using our hosting services, please
-acknowledge our work, by referring to this system as "GNU/Linux", not
-as just "Linux", when you mention it in connection with this package.</p>
+acknowledge our work by referring to this system as "GNU/Linux", not
+just "Linux", when you mention it in connection with this package.</p>
 
 <p>If you'd like to help correct other confusions, you can find some
-suggestions in <a
+suggestions at <a
 
href="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html";>http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/words-to-avoid.html</a>.</p>
 
 <h3>Project naming</h3>



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