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Index: WesnothHistory
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  -After several voyages to the Great Continent, the elder Crown Prince falls 
ill and dies.
  -His younger brother is implicated in a plot to kill him.
  -As a distraction the younger Prince starts a war with the Wesfolk and their 
Lich-Lords.
- -The Lich-Lords sense they will be destroyed and open gates to the homeland 
of the Orcs in the West.
+ -The Lich-Lords sense they will be destroyed and
+  open gates to the homeland of the Orcs in the West.
  -The Green Isle is overrun with Orcs.
  -The Wesfolk desert their Lich-Lords as they fear becoming prey for the Orcs.
  -Prince Haldric leads the evacuation of the survivors to the Great Continent.
@@ -28,14 +29,15 @@
  -Messengers from Wesmere Forest come and ask Haldric to come before the 
Ka'lian.
  -Prince Haldric asks the Four Elvish Lords
   (Dionli, Logalmier, Aryad, and El'Isomithir) for help and land.
- -They set before him four quests to prove his worth.
- -Haldric completes the quests and is granted the plains north and south of 
the Great River.
+ -They set before him four quests to prove his worth, which he completes.
+ -Haldric is granted the plains north and south of the Great River.
  -Haldric agrees to a Pact of Mutual Defence with the Elves.
  -Haldric founds the country of Wesnoth in these lands.
 
 
 [Reign of Haldric I] http://wesnoth.slack.it/wesnoth-images/noble-lord.png
- -Orcs, following the ships fleeing from the Green Isle, begin to arrive on 
the Great Continent.
+ -Orcs, following the ships fleeing from the Green Isle, begin to arrive
+  on the Great Continent.
  -These Orcs are defeated by Haldric's forces.
  -Some of the Orcish survivors flee back to the Green Isle, others move to 
attack the Elves.
  -King Haldric I is established as first King of Wesnoth.
@@ -53,9 +55,9 @@
 
 [Reign of Haldric II]
  -Prince Haldric II ascends to the throne of Wesnoth.
- -King Haldric II allows Elven emissaries to return to Wesnoth.
- -King Haldric II sends General Aldar west with a portion of the Wesnoth army 
to aid the Elves.
- -Aldar succeeds in defeating the Orcs in the eastern lands with the help of 
the Elves.
+ -King Haldric II allows emissaries of the Elves to return to Wesnoth.
+ -Haldric sends General Aldar west with a portion of the Wesnoth army, to aid 
the Elves.
+ -The Orcs in the eastern lands are defeated.
 
 [LONG time later]
 
@@ -68,11 +70,11 @@
 [Reign of Garard I]
  -Garard the first becomes king of Wesnoth.
  - [Two years later]
- -Dark hordes of undead are reported roaming in the plains of the East, 
terrorising the inhabitants.
+ -Dark hordes of undead are reported in the plains of the East, terrorising 
the inhabitants.
  -Garard sends a battle group to defeat the undead.
  -Soliders retern from the battle reporting a crushing defeat.
  -Garard asks the council of mages for help and is advised to send more troops.
- -The young mage Delfador asks the King for funds and permission to lead a 
force of mages instead.
+ -The young mage Delfador asks the King for permission to lead a force of 
mages instead.
  -Garard agrees to let Delfador confront the undead.
  -Delfador is successful.
  -Delfador becomes a trusted advisor to King Garard.