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Re: [Charter modification proposal]: and --> though
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MJ Ray |
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Re: [Charter modification proposal]: and --> though |
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Mon, 24 Sep 2007 21:55:33 +0100 |
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Davi Leal <address@hidden> wrote:
> Anyway, let me know if the below tiny modification improve it:
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> However, voting memberships expire yearly /and/ can be renewed.
> However, voting memberships expire yearly /though/ can be renewed.
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> /and/ --> /though/
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Maybe "though they can be renewed" or "but they can be renewed" but
"though" on its own sounds a little strange.
Regards,
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