02/13: gnu: Remove ‘open source’ from package descriptions.

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nckx pushed a commit to branch master
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commit 5a9c2abf9ecd47f4481c68cc5e57a85c84313645
Author: Tobias Geerinckx-Rice <me@tobias.gr>
AuthorDate: Sun Aug 14 02:00:00 2022 +0200

    gnu: Remove ‘open source’ from package descriptions.
    
    Also do some (trivial) editing where appropriate.
    
    * gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm (r-anaquin, r-rcppnumerical)
    [description]: Remove superfluous ‘open source’.
    * gnu/packages/debian.scm (apt-mirror)[description]: Likewise.
    Add @acronym{}.  Drop obscure Ubuntu for famous Trisquel.  Reorder.
    * gnu/packages/documentation.scm (scrollkeeper)[description]:
    Remove superfluous ‘open systems’.  Keep ‘Open Source’ in standard name.
    * gnu/packages/engineering.scm (freecad, cura-engine)[description]:
    Remove superfluous ‘open source’ and excessive puffery.
    * gnu/packages/firmware.scm (make-opensbi-package)
    [synopsis]: Remove ‘Open Source’.  Use @acronym{}.
    [description]: Fix first sentence to follow guidelines.  Use @acronym{}.
    * gnu/packages/game-development.scm (ioquake3, recastnavigation):
    [description]: Remove ‘open source’.
    * gnu/packages/graphics.scm (skia)[description]: Likewise.
    * gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm (sbcl-s-sysdeps)[description]: Likewise.
    * gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm (onnx)[description]: Likewise.
    Use @acronym{}.
    * gnu/packages/ocaml.scm (ocaml-cudf)[description]: Likewise.
---
 gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm     | 11 ++++++-----
 gnu/packages/debian.scm           |  6 +++---
 gnu/packages/documentation.scm    | 12 ++++++------
 gnu/packages/engineering.scm      | 19 +++++++++----------
 gnu/packages/firmware.scm         |  8 +++++---
 gnu/packages/game-development.scm |  7 ++-----
 gnu/packages/graphics.scm         |  5 +++--
 gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm         |  2 +-
 gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm |  8 ++++----
 gnu/packages/ocaml.scm            |  6 +++---
 10 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 42 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm b/gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm
index 111bd65823..7d2ca413e9 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/bioconductor.scm
@@ -2091,8 +2091,8 @@ canonical cancer pathways.")
     (description
      "The project is intended to support the use of @dfn{sequins}(synthetic
 sequencing spike-in controls) owned and made available by the Garvan Institute
-of Medical Research.  The goal is to provide a standard open source library for
-quantitative analysis, modelling and visualization of spike-in controls.")
+of Medical Research.  The goal is to provide a standard library for 
quantitative
+analysis, modelling, and visualization of spike-in controls.")
     (license license:bsd-3)))
 
 (define-public r-aneufinder
@@ -6542,9 +6542,10 @@ problems in genomics, brain imaging, astrophysics, and 
data mining.")
     `(("r-knitr" ,r-knitr)))
    (home-page "https://github.com/yixuan/RcppNumerical";)
    (synopsis "Rcpp integration for numerical computing libraries")
-   (description "This package provides a collection of open source libraries
-for numerical computing (numerical integration, optimization, etc.) and their
-integration with @code{Rcpp}.")
+   (description
+    "This package provides a collection of libraries for numerical computing
+(numerical integration, optimization, etc.) and their integration with
+@code{Rcpp}.")
    (license license:gpl2+)))
 
 (define-public r-apeglm
diff --git a/gnu/packages/debian.scm b/gnu/packages/debian.scm
index 5ff09393b9..67b66be38d 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/debian.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/debian.scm
@@ -331,9 +331,9 @@ debian/copyright for more information.")))))
       (home-page "http://apt-mirror.github.io/";)
       (synopsis "Script for mirroring a Debian repository")
       (description
-       "apt-mirror is a small tool that provides the ability to
-selectively mirror Debian and Ubuntu GNU/Linux distributions or any
-other apt sources typically provided by open source developers.")
+       "apt-mirror is a small tool that provides the ability to selectively
+mirror @acronym{APT, advanced package tool} sources, including GNU/Linux
+distributions such as Debian and Trisquel.")
       (license license:gpl2))))
 
 (define-public dpkg
diff --git a/gnu/packages/documentation.scm b/gnu/packages/documentation.scm
index 6f24149b5d..585a295fb4 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/documentation.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/documentation.scm
@@ -338,12 +338,12 @@ additional metadata about the object to which the 
docstring belongs.")
      (list intltool))
     (home-page "http://scrollkeeper.sourceforge.net/";)
     (synopsis "Open Documentation Cataloging Project")
-    (description "ScrollKeeper is a cataloging system for documentation on open
-systems.  It manages documentation metadata as specified by the Open Source
-Metadata Framework and provides a simple API to allow help browsers to find,
-sort, and search the document catalog.  It will also be able to communicate
-with catalog servers on the Net to search for documents which are not on the
-local system.")
+    (description
+     "ScrollKeeper is a cataloging system for documentation.  It manages
+documentation metadata as specified by the Open Source Metadata Framework and
+provides a simple API to allow help browsers to find, sort, and search the
+document catalog.  It will also be able to communicate with catalog servers on
+the Net to search for documents which are not on the local system.")
     (license lgpl2.1+)))
 
 (define-public zeal
diff --git a/gnu/packages/engineering.scm b/gnu/packages/engineering.scm
index 892a05d5d0..f195179413 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/engineering.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/engineering.scm
@@ -2527,12 +2527,11 @@ comments.")))
     (home-page "https://www.freecadweb.org/";)
     (synopsis "Your Own 3D Parametric Modeler")
     (description
-     "FreeCAD is a general purpose feature-based, parametric 3D modeler for
-CAD, MCAD, CAx, CAE and PLM, aimed directly at mechanical engineering and
-product design but also fits a wider range of uses in engineering, such as
-architecture or other engineering specialties.  It is 100% Open Source (LGPL2+
-license) and extremely modular, allowing for very advanced extension and
-customization.")
+     "FreeCAD is a general-purpose, feature-based, parametric 3D modeler for
+CAD, MCAD, CAx, CAE, and PLM.  It is aimed directly at mechanical engineering
+and product design but also fits a wider range of uses in engineering, such as
+architecture or other engineering specialties.  It is modular, allowing for
+extension and customization.")
     (license
      (list
       license:lgpl2.1+
@@ -3355,10 +3354,10 @@ facilitate the communication between Cura and its 
backend and similar code.")
                 "stb_image.h")))))))
     (home-page "https://github.com/Ultimaker/CuraEngine";)
     (synopsis "Cura slicing engine")
-    (description "CuraEngine is a powerful, fast and robust engine for
-processing 3D models into 3D printing instruction for Ultimaker and other
-GCode based 3D printers.  It is part of the larger open source project called
-Cura.")
+    (description
+     "CuraEngine is an engine for processing 3D models into 3D printing
+instructions for Ultimaker and other GCode-based 3D printers.  It is part of a
+larger project called Cura.")
     (license license:agpl3+)))
 
 (define-public cura-binary-data
diff --git a/gnu/packages/firmware.scm b/gnu/packages/firmware.scm
index a258af30bf..3ba5078b63 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/firmware.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/firmware.scm
@@ -265,9 +265,11 @@ broadband modem as found, for example, on PinePhone.")
                  bin))
              #t)))))
     (home-page "https://github.com/riscv-software-src/opensbi";)
-    (synopsis "RISC-V Open Source Supervisor Binary Interface")
-    (description "A reference implementation of the RISC-V SBI specifications
-for platform-specific firmwares executing in M-mode.")
+    (synopsis "RISC-V @acronym{SBI, Supervisor Binary Interface} 
implementation")
+    (description
+     "OpenSBI is the reference implementation of the RISC-V @acronym{SBI,
+Supervisory Binary Interface} specifications for platform-specific firmwares
+executing in M-mode.")
     (license (list license:bsd-2
                    ;; lib/utils/libfdt/* is dual licensed under bsd-2 and 
gpl2+.
                    license:gpl2+
diff --git a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm 
b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
index 7f05d8ed06..7b2fb8dac3 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/game-development.scm
@@ -2187,9 +2187,8 @@ of the others")
       (description "ioquake3 is a free software first person shooter engine
 based on the Quake 3: Arena and Quake 3: Team Arena source code.  Compared to
 the original, ioquake3 has been cleaned up, bugs have been fixed and features
-added.  The permanent goal is to create the open source Quake 3 distribution
-upon which people base their games, ports to new platforms, and other
-projects.")
+added.  The permanent goal is to create a Quake 3 distribution upon which
+people base their games, ports to new platforms, and other projects.")
       (license license:gpl2))))
 
 (define-public instead
@@ -2806,8 +2805,6 @@ construction toolset for games.
 @item It is automatic, which means that you can throw any level geometry
       at it and you will get robust mesh out.
 @item It is fast which means swift turnaround times for level designers.
-@item It is open source so it comes with full source and you can
-      customize it to your heart's content.
 @end itemize
 
 The Recast process starts with constructing a voxel mold from a level
diff --git a/gnu/packages/graphics.scm b/gnu/packages/graphics.scm
index 1afaf687be..9a378e76a6 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/graphics.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/graphics.scm
@@ -1948,8 +1948,9 @@ Cflags: -I${includedir}~%" #$output #$version))))))))
       (inputs (list expat fontconfig freetype harfbuzz mesa libwebp zlib))
       (home-page "https://skia.org/";)
       (synopsis "2D graphics library")
-      (description "Skia is an open source 2D graphics library.  It can be
-used for drawing text, geometries, and images and has support for:
+      (description
+       "Skia is a 2D graphics library for drawing text, geometries, and images.
+It supports:
 @itemize
 @item 3x3 matrices with perspective
 @item antialiasing, transparency, filters
diff --git a/gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm b/gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm
index cdd4d479ac..6018c4deff 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/lisp-xyz.scm
@@ -6831,7 +6831,7 @@ extension-points via the concept of hooks.")
       (synopsis "Common Lisp abstraction layer over platform dependent 
functionality")
       (description "@code{s-sysdeps} is an abstraction layer over platform
 dependent functionality.  This simple package is used as a building block in a
-number of other open source projects.
+number of other projects.
 
 @code{s-sysdeps} abstracts:
 
diff --git a/gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm 
b/gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm
index cd0640cd27..c61428486c 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/machine-learning.scm
@@ -828,10 +828,10 @@ in terms of new algorithms.")
     (home-page "https://onnx.ai/";)
     (synopsis "Open Neural Network Exchange")
     (description
-     "Open Neural Network Exchange (ONNX) provides an open source format for
-AI models, both deep learning and traditional ML.  It defines an extensible
-computation graph model, as well as definitions of built-in operators and
-standard data types.")
+     "@acronym{ONNX, Open Neural Network Exchange} is a format for AI models,
+both deep learning and traditional @acronym{ML, machine learning}.  It defines
+an extensible computation graph model, as well as definitions of built-in
+operators and standard data types.")
     (license license:expat)))
 
 (define-public python-onnx
diff --git a/gnu/packages/ocaml.scm b/gnu/packages/ocaml.scm
index eb60cd00f0..79df84054f 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/ocaml.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/ocaml.scm
@@ -608,9 +608,9 @@ for day to day programming.")
     (native-inputs (list ocaml-ounit2))
     (home-page "https://www.mancoosi.org/cudf/";)
     (synopsis "CUDF library (part of the Mancoosi tools)")
-    (description "CUDF (for Common Upgradeability Description Format) is a
-format for describing upgrade scenarios in package-based Free and Open Source
-Software distribution.")
+    (description
+     "@acronym{CUDF, Common Upgradeability Description Format} is a format for
+describing upgrade scenarios in package-based software distributions.")
     ;; With static-linking exception
     (license license:lgpl2.1+)))