[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm article.rst

[Toni Alatalo]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Toni Alatalo <address@hidden>   03/02/13 08:30:37

Modified files:
        storm          : article.rst 

Log message:
        more language fiddling

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.140&tr2=1.141&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.140 manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.141
--- manuscripts/storm/article.rst:1.140 Thu Feb 13 08:21:37 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/article.rst       Thu Feb 13 08:30:37 2003
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@
 is limited to client-server architecture, whereas Storm exploits adaptive 
peer-to-peer 
 architecture. Groove [ref] is an improved design of Lotus Notes, which employs 
 strong security mechanisms and uses peer-to-peer functionality 
-as basis of communication channel among limited amount of participants. 
+as the basis of communication channels among limited amount of participants. 
 Neither of these systems supports the immutability of data.
 
 .. thesis-benja: remove paragraph above
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
 occupies several positions in the key space, one for each 
 (key,value) pair. In such a system, the indirection of placing
 close keys in the custody of a 'hashtable bucket' peer is removed
-at the cost of each peer maintining one node in the overlay network
+at the cost of each peer maintaining one node in the overlay network
 for each (key,value) pair it publishes.
 
 .. hemppah's original text before benja's changes: