[Gzz-commits] gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu mastert...

[Hermanni Hyytiälä]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    gzz
Changes by:     Hermanni Hyytiälä <address@hidden>      03/02/26 03:59:14

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        Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu: masterthesis.tex 

Log message:
        better english in conclusion

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http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex.diff?tr1=1.76&tr2=1.77&r1=text&r2=text

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diff -u gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.76 
gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.77
--- gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.76       Wed Feb 
26 03:52:02 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex    Wed Feb 26 
03:59:13 2003
@@ -1901,7 +1901,7 @@
 After that, we summarized open problems in Peer-to-Peer networks. Specifically,
 we divided open problems into three sub-categories: security related problems,
 performance related problems and miscellaneous problems. Each of these
-sub-categories have number of open problems, where there are no solutions
+sub-categories have number of open problems, in which there are no solutions
 yet, or solutions are only partial. Much research work is required to
 solve open problems.
 
@@ -1916,7 +1916,7 @@
 for identifying data. Second, our Storm design uses Semantic-Free references
 for locating data in distributed networks. As the authors of 
\cite{balakrishnan03semanticfree},
 we also observe that tightly structured overlays provide general purpose
-interface to next-generation Reference Resolution Services. Second, by using 
+interface to next-generation reference resolution services. Second, by using 
 DOLR method of tightly structured overlay, we can minimize the the lack 
 of locality in tightly structured overlays. Finally, we believe that issues 
 related to tightly structured overlays are solved in near future, because of