[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/09/17 20:17:18

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.27 
manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.28
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.27    Wed Sep 17 20:06:57 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Wed Sep 17 20:17:18 2003
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
 Computers are supposed to be "information technology,"
 to help you to keep your information organized. But
-we still have no good **tools to** help us **remember** our tasks, 
+we still have no good **tools** to help us **remember** our tasks, 
 ideas and obligations; no tools to organize what we
 know about a thing, so that we can **understand** it better;
 no tools to **structure our thoughts**; no tools, 
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@
    items they are linked to, and so on. [XXX less linkedy-linked]
 
    As the current item and the items related to it are always
-   in the foreground, we believe that this view will not
+   in the foreground, we hope that this view will not
    cause disorientation. However, we have not done any
    user-testing, yet.