[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/09/17 22:25:01

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

Log message:
        more intro

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http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst.diff?tr1=1.32&tr2=1.33&r1=text&r2=text

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diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.32 
manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.33
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.32    Wed Sep 17 22:14:58 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Wed Sep 17 22:25:01 2003
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@
 This may be intended; for example, when you'll meet
 somebody, you may want to be reminded of things they borrowed
 from you and ought to return. It may also come in unexpected:
-Planning the next chapter in your novel, you notice
-that you had an idea for how to develop one of your characters
-(connected to that character), which you had forgotten about.
+Planning the next chapter in your novel,
+you notice that you once had an idea about how to develop one
+of your characters, which you had forgotten about [#novel-planning-example]_.
 
-We propose to build a whole computing environment around this,
-replacing concepts such as files and applications. ...
+We propose to build a whole computing environment organized
+around this concept. XXX
 
 
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@@ -419,6 +419,14 @@
    It would be possible to show and hide each type of relationship
    independently, by selecting or deselecting it on a list.
 
+.. [#novel-planning-example] The characters, events, twists
+   of your story would be items, as would be the chapters
+   and parts. You would be connecting the chapter you're
+   working on to the events in that chapter, which would
+   in turn be connected to the characters they affect; the
+   characters, in turn, would be connected to your notes
+   about them, in this case the idea about how to develop
+   one of them.