[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/09/18 02:41:54

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.49    Thu Sep 18 02:38:25 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 02:41:54 2003
@@ -177,7 +177,8 @@
 
 (XXX better section title)
 
-First, let us stress that the user interfaces shown are
+First, let us stress that unlike, for example, the Web, 
+the user interfaces shown are
 for **personal use, not for presentation** [#hypertext-personal]_.
 
 
@@ -199,6 +200,11 @@
 
 Under the hood: Hyperstructure
 ==============================
+
+At the bottom of an item-centered computing environment,
+as described in the `Introduction`_, is a network of items,
+XXX
+
 
 .. In this section, we shall attempt to define what we mean by the word 
"hyperstructure",
    as used e.g. in the name of the First Hyperstructure Workshop at XXX.