[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/09/18 02:38:25

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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        Personal

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diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.48 
manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.49
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.48    Thu Sep 18 02:36:06 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 02:38:25 2003
@@ -22,6 +22,7 @@
 
 spreadsheets
 
+
 Introduction
 ============
 
@@ -81,7 +82,8 @@
 
 **Related items are always near each other.**
 This allows you **see the information** you entered 
-**in different contexts** than the one you entered it in 
[#notalwayseverything]_.
+**in different contexts** than the one 
+you entered it in [#notalwayseverything]_.
 
 This may be intended; for example, when you'll meet
 somebody, you may want to be reminded of things they borrowed
@@ -175,9 +177,9 @@
 
 (XXX better section title)
 
-- focus on personal hypertext 
+First, let us stress that the user interfaces shown are
+for **personal use, not for presentation** [#hypertext-personal]_.
 
-  - not really just personal, but any *use* except presentation
 
 
 - user-interface -level co-operation by independently written applitudes 
@@ -536,6 +538,11 @@
    
    It would be possible to show and hide each type of relationship
    independently, by selecting or deselecting it on a list.
+
+.. [#hypertext-personal] Much of the work on the hypertext/hypermedia
+   field is focused on *presenting* information to and *audience*,
+   on hypertext/hypermedia being a *medium*. 
+   
 
 .. [#novel-planning-example] The characters, events, twists
    of your story would be items, as would be the chapters