[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.84    Thu Sep 18 08:19:54 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 08:23:47 2003
@@ -102,9 +102,10 @@
 (XXX better section title)
 
 
-Let us stress that unlike, for example, the Web, 
-the user interfaces shown are
-for **personal use - working/editing/authoring/programming, not for 
presentation** [#hypertext-personal]_.
+Let us stress that the system we discuss is not primarily
+intended as a medium, for communicating information
+to others, but as a **tool for personal use** -
+working/editing/authoring/programming [#hypertext-personal]_.
 
 An example view from an item-centered
 system is shown in Figure 1.
@@ -731,6 +732,14 @@
    to the ideas in HOSS/structural computing
    (`Nürnberg et al 1996`_, `Nürnberg et al 1997`_).
 
+..  [#hypertext-personal] Much of the work on the hypertext/hypermedia
+    field is focused on *presenting* information to and *audience*,
+    on hypertext/hypermedia being a *medium*. 
+    The *extensional* structure, 
+    as introduced by `DeRose (1989)`_ is an important concept 
+    in this context: it could be said to be structure
+    that is not part of the medium of presentation.
+   
 .. [#fig1note] This visualization is a focus+context (`Furnas 1985`_)
    view of the item graph.
 
@@ -755,14 +764,6 @@
    It would be possible to show and hide each type of relationship
    independently, by selecting or deselecting it on a list.
 
-..  [#hypertext-personal] Much of the work on the hypertext/hypermedia
-    field is focused on *presenting* information to and *audience*,
-    on hypertext/hypermedia being a *medium*. 
-    The *extensional* structure, 
-    as introduced by `DeRose (1989)`_ is an important concept 
-    in this context: it could be said to be structure
-    that is not part of the medium of presentation.
-   
 
 .. [#novel-planning-example] The characters, events, twists
    of your story would be items, as would be the chapters