[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/09/18 08:16:29

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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        Move personal to beginning of section

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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.82    Thu Sep 18 08:15:24 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 08:16:29 2003
@@ -102,6 +102,10 @@
 (XXX better section title)
 
 
+Let us stress that unlike, for example, the Web, 
+the user interfaces shown are
+for **personal use - working/editing/authoring/programming, not for 
presentation** [#hypertext-personal]_.
+
 An example view from an item-centered
 system is shown in Figure 1.
 
@@ -194,10 +198,6 @@
 help us to **organize our thoughts**.
 
 
-First, let us stress that unlike, for example, the Web, 
-the user interfaces shown are
-for **personal use - working/editing/authoring/programming, not for 
presentation** [#hypertext-personal]_.
-
 
 
 With Nelson [XXXfw], we propose a user interface based
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
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 At the bottom of an item-centered computing environment,
-as described in the `Introduction`_, is a network of items,
+is the *network of items*.
 XXX