[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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 Unlike in most annotation-related projects (see, e.g., 
 `Marshall (1998)`_ and references therein) there is 
-no directly annotation-related program code in FenPDF. 
+no directly annotation-specific program code in FenPDF. 
 The different orthogonal
 structures combined just give the user the opportunity 
-to create any kinds of structure. One common use we've noticed
-is transcluding small regions from related articles to a single
-canvas.
+to create any kinds of structure. One common pattern of use we've noticed
+is transcluding small regions from articles related to a single
+topic canvas.
 
 Explicit support for taxonomical hypertext (`Parunak 1991`_)
 is currently being planned.