[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.101
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.100   Thu Sep 18 10:34:45 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 10:53:58 2003
@@ -27,6 +27,7 @@
 
 Computers are supposed to be "information technology,"
 to help you to keep your information organized. 
+We propose XXXX
 
 Paper notes don't work: Unless you are really tidy, you
 have to remember that you took a note about a subject
@@ -156,7 +157,7 @@
    __ full-document-connections.gen.png
 
 Instead of having separate applications, we would have **views** 
-for **specific kinds of information** [#multiple-views-refs].
+for **specific kinds of information** [#multiple-views-refs]_.
 For example, a historian might want to mark places on a map,
 connecting them to the events that have taken place there,
 and they might want to show the events on a zoomable timeline. 
[#annotating-views]_
@@ -164,7 +165,7 @@
 The content of a document or e-mail is shown when the user clicks
 on it. Similarly, the map or timeline would be shown when the
 user has selected a place or event. In this way, **all views 
-are part of the network of items.** [#views-are-f+c]_
+are part of the network of items.** [#views-are-fandc]_
 (There may be more than one view available for the same item.
 The user can choose between alternative views through a menu.)
 
@@ -179,7 +180,7 @@
 
 Instead of forcing the user to think in applications,
 such a system lends itself to be structured around
-the user's tasks. Nelson [XXXfwref] uses the term
+the user's tasks. `Nelson (1999b)`_ uses the term
 **applitude** for such a "[zone] of functionality."
 An applitude is not "walled off" from the rest of the
 system; when information from a different applitude
@@ -687,6 +688,8 @@
 
 .. _`Nelson 1999b`:
 
+.. _`Nelson (1999b)`:
+
 **Nelson, T.H.,** (1999b)
 "ZX, a New User Environment [ now Floating World(tm) ]
 Preliminary 1999 Specifications".
@@ -812,7 +815,7 @@
    for example, the connection between places on a map
    to events in a history-- is one such annotating view.
 
-.. [#views-are-f+c] Like the visualizations of the basic
+.. [#views-are-fandc] Like the visualizations of the basic
    network of items, this is a focus+context view.
 
 .. [#novel-planning-example] The characters, events, twists