[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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@@ -331,7 +331,11 @@
 anything in such a visualization representing *all* the items
 a user stores in their computer seems bound to be a herculean task.
 
-We describe our focus+context visualizations of RDF
+Visualizations that change the layout when the user moves
+from node to node are not as common, but for example
+Ontorama (`Eklund 2002`_) uses hyperbolic spaces for this.
+
+We describe our visualizations of RDF
 in `Section 4.2.1`_.
 
 
@@ -420,7 +424,7 @@
 sorting criteria (first name, last name, birthday etc.)
 
 We are planning to release a version of the RDF 
-browsing and editing functionality as a separate product,
+browsing and editing functionality as independently,
 for use by people who want to edit RDF but are not interested
 in the full Fenfire system.
 
@@ -714,21 +718,12 @@
 the view hierarchy. However, the buoys are completely subjugated
 to the focus and are not independent windows *per se*.
 
-5.7 RDF focus+context
----------------------
-
-There are other projects working on visualizing RDF
-in various ways. For instance, Ontorama (`Eklund 2002`_) uses hyperbolic
-spaces for this. However, it appears that most, if not all,
-RDF visualizations are centered on ontologies rather than
-actual user data.
-
 .. _`Section 6`:
 
 6 Conclusions
 =============
 
-We have presented...
+We have presented... XXX
 
 Acknowledgments
 ===============
@@ -1096,7 +1091,7 @@
     implemented, for example, as a relational database, 
     with individual data structures being represented as tables.
     This would necessiate a system where users could add
-    new tables at any time, without hazzle.
+    new tables at any time, without hassle.
 
 .. [#zzstructure] zzStructure is the "generic term" Nelson
    recommends for discussing the structure used in ZigZag(TM),