[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.174   Thu Sep 18 17:40:27 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 17:45:02 2003
@@ -21,9 +21,8 @@
 Computers should help us with **organizing our lives**, rather
 than making them more difficult. We need
 a system **structured** around **items** -- 
-**things that we care about**, such as people, arguments and ideas 
-(rather than
-directories and files).
+**things that we care about**, such as people, arguments and ideas --
+rather than directories and files.
 
 Based on Ted Nelson's ideas,
 we describe the desgign of a computing environment based on a 
**hyperstructure**,
@@ -82,7 +81,7 @@
 and so on. 
 We need a system
 in which these **items** (`Nelson 2000`_) are visible things
-that can be connected to each other; we propose,
+that can be connected to each other; a system,
 in technical terms, a hypermedia system in which items
 are first-class objects [#can-use-structcomp]_.