Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I

[Matias Fonzo]

Hi again :-)

El 2019-12-29 06:11, Michael Siegel escribió:
> Am 28.12.19 um 23:46 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
> > Michael,
> >
> > I have carried out the suggestions you made, you can take a look at 
> > the
> > current status of the installer here[1]:
> >
> > [1] https://share.riseup.net/#4NH1c8qSm2eFg5oGg6n_JA
>
> Hm… I'm not sure this really is an improvement. The previous version 
> was
> really quite good already. It just needed a few small fixes. So, I'd
> rather go with that (plus the fixes I suggested) and try to find the
> right wording for what Space and Enter are used for. The text should
> really be kept concise and that's what the previous version was.
>
> So, my suggestion is to revert to that and try to fix it without adding
> any extra explanation. Once we have the terms right, this should not be
> much of a problem. Maybe the Ncurses documentation can help with that.
> I'll give it a read as soon as I can.

I have made new changes trying to follow the previous changes or 
corrections to be applied with the difference that I have changed the 
following:

- I am using "Use the cursor keys .... to move to a new position on a 
window" rather than "to move around in the installer's menu" (I am not 
100% sure if this is correct, and also I don't like too much how it 
sounds).

- I left out Enter because it's pretty obvious, more so in distributions 
like Dragora.

- Space is not mentioned either, it is better to mention it where it is 
useful (in the checklists).

Please take a look how the initial screen of the installer looks now[1]:

[1] https://share.riseup.net/#0bPgjUl5ggsRE7vZrO2Q1A