Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I

[Michael Siegel]

Am 04.02.20 um 00:21 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
> El 2020-02-02 10:45, Michael Siegel escribió:
>>
>> Well, as I've stated earlier, I thought the version before 2019-12-29[1]
>> was quite viable already and just needed a few adjustments, some of
>> which I suggested in two messages to this mailing list on 2019-12-28 and
>> 2019-12-29:
>>
>> https://lists.nongnu.org/archive/html/dragora-users/2019-12/msg00007.html
> 
> Okay.  I have made the changes as you suggested in the previous message
> ^.  Also trying an explanation for <Space>, <Enter>.  Let me know what
> you think.

That looks really good!

Only two minor issues:

#1
“Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.”

It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.”

#2
“Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any
time.”

I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not
wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that
further, if you're interested.

> P.S: I haven't uploaded the package for these changes yet, as I'm in the
> bootstrap process.

That's fine. Just take your time.


Thanks
Michael