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Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I
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Michael Siegel |
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Re: [Dragora-users] dragora-installer: Message improvement proposal I |
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Wed, 5 Feb 2020 19:53:58 +0100 |
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Am 05.02.20 um 01:09 schrieb Matias Fonzo:
> El 2020-02-04 20:50, Michael Siegel escribió:
>>
>> Only two minor issues:
>>
>> #1
>> “Use the cursor keys to move around the installer's menus.”
>>
>> It needs to be “move around in the installer's menus.”
>
> That explains why it sounded weird to me.
>
>> #2
>> “Remember that you can use [Ctrl]+[C] to abort the installation at any
>> time.”
>>
>> I would omit “Remember that” at the beginning of the sentence. It's not
>> wrong, but it simply seems a bit weird. I could try to explain that
>> further, if you're interested.
>
> http://git.savannah.nongnu.org/cgit/dragora.git/commit/?id=210d3ccc855e1b1e54d92758e656c5166ed53b36
Ok, that one is good to go now, if you ask me.
> Are there other messages you would like to improve?.
Yes, there are. I'll stick to the scheme of one thread per message. Just
a minute.
Michael