[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/xupdf article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/02/15 18:24:57

Modified files:
        xupdf          : article.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.192&tr2=1.193&r1=text&r2=text

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Index: manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.192 manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.193
--- manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst:1.192 Sat Feb 15 18:21:05 2003
+++ manuscripts/xupdf/article.rst       Sat Feb 15 18:24:57 2003
@@ -437,23 +437,22 @@
    \label{sec-breaklines}
 
 The rectangular frames used in most user 
-interfaces are also likely a decision resulting
-mostly from performance. Especially when showing a fragment
+interfaces likely are also a decision resulting
+mostly from performance. Especially when showing part
 of a document in a buoy, a rectangular frame could be 
-visually confusing, and doesn't provide a clear indication
-of whether we are looking at the edge of the currently shown
-part or the whole content.
+visually confusing, as it doesn't provide a clear indication
+whether we see only a fragment of the target or all of it.
 
 *Break lines* are a technique used in technical drawing 
 for indicating
 where an object extends beyond what is drawn in the current
 diagram. It is visually clear since it uses a shape that
 is obviously not a part of the object's own shape
-(wiggly freehand line), see Fig. [ref-fignasa]_.
+(wiggly freehand line, see Fig. [ref-fignasa]_).
 
 We apply this technique by drawing the buoys as 
-non-photorealistically torn-off pieces of the target document. 
-However, because of the requirements of fluid animation,
+non-photorealistically pieces torn off the target document. 
+To allow for fluid animation,
 the shapes of the break lines need to be carefully designed.
 
 The shape of a torn edge is tied to its location on